Review Detail of Ice_Princesss in Townsvalley : The Lost Kingdom

Okay so when I read the first chapter, I noticed a punctuation errors in which you would put comma's instead of full stops so I think you should watch out for punctuation errors. Also, there are times when some words are capitalised, but they shouldn't so watch out for that too. I suggest using Grammarly as it helps with punctuation and grammar (I use it too). Also, the fact that it's your first time writing a novel is impressive, because the way you write is quite descriptive and I love that because it makes me picture what I'm reading. Overall, the novel has an interesting plot so just work on your grammar and punctuation and you'll be okay. Good luck 😊