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Althen
AlthenLv54yr
2020-04-07 02:00

I think the best advice that I can tell you is to read the spider. There are only small similarities in the stories but I think most of what you are looking for in your story is there. (From how to develop the story, to introduce and evolve characters and, if needed, how to get the harem that you are looking for)

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Drax152
4.2
25 Chs

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Drax152
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I am already caught up with the Spider. Just waiting for the next update :( My whole kind of idea here is that he himself enforces the slow down of the harem aspect. He himself goes "Ay, slow it down here, damn"

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