Review Detail of emrade in The Mysterious Black Magician
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I only read the first 30 or so chapters. Nothing about the MC is likeable. He is weak AF, he is dumb AF. Author seems to be kinda forcing a character development, forcing a romance from the start? Dunno, I guess this just isn't my cup of tea.
The Mysterious Black Magician
Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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He knows how weak he is, yet he was publicly trying to cause trouble, after jumping around like a frog continously, he still had to be saved at the end. He had been bullied since like forever, but what made him think that that was the right time or place to retaliate? Plus he wasn't strong enough to be thinking of revenge yet.
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:If I may ask, what makes him dumb?
Since you only read the free chapters, kudos to you. Only free readers are loud to complain. Also, when is the right time to think of revenge? When you are dead? You’re free to think and do unless no one notice. And the MC did just that. He just used the opportunity to his advantage my friend.
emrade:He knows how weak he is, yet he was publicly trying to cause trouble, after jumping around like a frog continously, he still had to be saved at the end. He had been bullied since like forever, but what made him think that that was the right time or place to retaliate? Plus he wasn't strong enough to be thinking of revenge yet.
I understand what you mean, but the free chapters are usually when you decide if or not you'd like a book. Mind you, I didn't even finish the free chapters as I couldn't take it anymore. I understand trying to defend your MC but MC is weak, has no backing yet he was trying to take revenge in public, it just didn't feel logical. Anyway, maybe it got better later on, if so I'd maybe give it a try again later in the future and re-evaluate.
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Since you only read the free chapters, kudos to you. Only free readers are loud to complain. Also, when is the right time to think of revenge? When you are dead? You’re free to think and do unless no one notice. And the MC did just that. He just used the opportunity to his advantage my friend.
I undertand why you said he’s weak and why he did that even though he’s weak. It the same comment with those guys who also dropped it before they learned the reason of his action. I don’t want to spoil anyone. You’re free to rate it as a reader. I’m not defending my MC, I’m just pointing out your mistake in saying no development. You only read few chapters and you stated like you know the whole story. That’s BS.
emrade:He knows how weak he is, yet he was publicly trying to cause trouble, after jumping around like a frog continously, he still had to be saved at the end. He had been bullied since like forever, but what made him think that that was the right time or place to retaliate? Plus he wasn't strong enough to be thinking of revenge yet.
Author, I didn't say there was no development. I said it felt like a forced development. And I wasnt focusing on the fact that he was weak, of course he would get stronger, I was only saying he was trying to take revenge at the wrong time and wrong place that's all.
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:I undertand why you said he’s weak and why he did that even though he’s weak. It the same comment with those guys who also dropped it before they learned the reason of his action. I don’t want to spoil anyone. You’re free to rate it as a reader. I’m not defending my MC, I’m just pointing out your mistake in saying no development. You only read few chapters and you stated like you know the whole story. That’s BS.
Ah, actually I realized that you’re not the person who I intended to send my reply to. Your comment was similar and so I thought it was you.
emrade:Author, I didn't say there was no development. I said it felt like a forced development. And I wasnt focusing on the fact that he was weak, of course he would get stronger, I was only saying he was trying to take revenge at the wrong time and wrong place that's all.