Review Detail of vkg313 in The Mysterious Black Magician

I'm going to be honest. The writing quality is low. Really low. The author definitely isn't a native speaker (or is a child). I can't see any proof of a Writer's Pride when I read this story with all of the constant errors. Not sure if it's worth paying money for this. Has frequent updates Story seems a bit forced so far. Doesn't feel too natural, and we don't know why he is being picked on. If the only reason is because he is an orphan, then you can really see the difference in values between Americans and wherever the author came from. The MC seems to be a complete loser, but this could change in the future. I have no idea, but it's 3 stars for the current MC personality. He's also a super siscon and really dumb, so that makes it even worse. The other characters are currently 2 dimensional as well. World seems interesting, and I'm assuming that this is why many people haven't left already. All in all, if you can get through the writing, then feel free to read. Otherwise, it isn't worth it.