Review Detail of godstitch in The Mysterious Black Magician
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so what chapter dose it get good. Like an OP mc. Cuz I like it so far but it's slow beyond belief like those books they make u read at school anyways lt me know and I dont mean like lvl 2 I mean like bad ass s*****.
The Mysterious Black Magician
Fhrutz_D_Hollow
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What do you think? You are very suspicious tho. Since you are the only one who said that couldn’t read my book. So, who are the retarded? My thousands of readers who enjoyed reading my books or you alone?
knijn:i do know how to read... but do you know how to write a readable book?
"So, who are the retarded" your lack of grammar in response to me saying you can't write is enough to show that i'm not the one that is retarded...
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:What do you think? You are very suspicious tho. Since you are the only one who said that couldn’t read my book. So, who are the retarded? My thousands of readers who enjoyed reading my books or you alone?
Seeing that you replied to me is already enough to show that my writing is readable. Who can perfect a grammar? You? Then make your own book! Let’s see how good you are.
knijn:"So, who are the retarded" your lack of grammar in response to me saying you can't write is enough to show that i'm not the one that is retarded...
"Who can perfect a grammar?" As a Dutch 17yo I can assure you even the most retarded of kids in my class have better grammar than you. I honestly am embarrassed for you.
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Seeing that you replied to me is already enough to show that my writing is readable. Who can perfect a grammar? You? Then make your own book! Let’s see how good you are.
Oh is that so? Then okay. When do I say have a good grammar? But since you do understand my reply, then it’s readable.
knijn:"Who can perfect a grammar?" As a Dutch 17yo I can assure you even the most retarded of kids in my class have better grammar than you. I honestly am embarrassed for you.
readable on a comment level and readable on a book level are two different things.... It seems that grammar isn't the problem you just have a room temperature IQ.
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Oh is that so? Then okay. When do I say have a good grammar? But since you do understand my reply, then it’s readable.image
We are talking about writing though. The book and comment was written by the same person. So what is the difference? And talking about my IQ? I didn’t say i have great IQ. If you have, then great for you. You are awesome then. Bravoooo! I’m just a poor writer though. If you are not happy with my book, there are more books there. You are free to go and read.
knijn:readable on a comment level and readable on a book level are two different things.... It seems that grammar isn't the problem you just have a room temperature IQ.
when someone talks about readable you have to understand what they're talking about because "1 4m th3 gr43t3st" is still readable but no one would call a book that was written like that readable... just hire an editor i can assure you that the people reading this book will increase because if a book is written this bad but still has readers you atleast know how to tell an interesting story
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:We are talking about writing though. The book and comment was written by the same person. So what is the difference? And talking about my IQ? I didn’t say i have great IQ. If you have, then great for you. You are awesome then. Bravoooo! I’m just a poor writer though. If you are not happy with my book, there are more books there. You are free to go and read.
Thanks for the recommendation, but as i said, I’m poor. Editor need bucks and most of them are expensive. Only the top 50 authors can afford them. I came here, in this platform, to tell a story for everyone to enjoy. As long as many readers enjoyed reading it, it’s fine for me. Editor will come late when I have better salary.
knijn: when someone talks about readable you have to understand what they're talking about because "1 4m th3 gr43t3st" is still readable but no one would call a book that was written like that readable... just hire an editor i can assure you that the people reading this book will increase because if a book is written this bad but still has readers you atleast know how to tell an interesting story
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Thanks for the recommendation, but as i said, I’m poor. Editor need bucks and most of them are expensive. Only the top 50 authors can afford them. I came here, in this platform, to tell a story for everyone to enjoy. As long as many readers enjoyed reading it, it’s fine for me. Editor will come late when I have better salary.
Sorry can’t tell you that. If you wanted to know. Write your own book and be a contracted author like me. Webnovel is a good platform though. I guess better than any other platform. Don’t worry, as long as your book is passable to their taste, they might offer a contract to you. But I won’t say for certain. P.S my salary as of now is just enough to pay a house rent. Since, I’m not one of the top authors.
knijn:how much do you make on a chapter? because editors aren't really that expensive?
Fhrutz_D_Hollow:Sorry can’t tell you that. If you wanted to know. Write your own book and be a contracted author like me. Webnovel is a good platform though. I guess better than any other platform. Don’t worry, as long as your book is passable to their taste, they might offer a contract to you. But I won’t say for certain. P.S my salary as of now is just enough to pay a house rent. Since, I’m not one of the top authors.
knijn:was wondering because you can get an editor for 1dollar every A4 page
knijn:oh shit you must really be broke if 1dollar a page is too much