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holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv155yr
2020-02-27 19:59

The novel is not bad at all for what it is, if you came here for R18 stuff than you good.. writing quality its ok,,, world development well didn’t see any as of chapter 20 so I don’t really count it it’s still early,,,, update stability we get around 2 chapter per day so really good for me... all in all as author is new and English is not his first language this is a well deserved 4 stars.... If mc was op would have been a personal 5 stars (I like op mc) but well mc gotta struggle... mc probably will be strong later on but I don’t get that invested in R18 novel to read around 100 chapters before I get my badass mc.. well thanks and author keep on the hard work...

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LamenThief
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Very well said. 4 stars is fine to me. I failed in world development and I intend to improve it over time. Mc is weak now, but he will quickly learn to use the power he gains from other girls, you have to remember that it is still day 1, he had his first time in sex a few hours ago. Ty for this nice review and keep reading. :D

holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv15

i only review books i plan on reading for a long time and i care about.. and pls don't drop...

LamenThief:Very well said. 4 stars is fine to me. I failed in world development and I intend to improve it over time. Mc is weak now, but he will quickly learn to use the power he gains from other girls, you have to remember that it is still day 1, he had his first time in sex a few hours ago. Ty for this nice review and keep reading. :D
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