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LamenThief
LamenThiefAuthor5yr
2020-03-14 04:30

Author here.✌ I just want to thank all you for reading my novel. Really thanks to everyone who votes and comment as it helpss me a lot!❤ English is not my mother tongue, so I hope you will forgive me for my grammatical errors and misuse of words sometimes.🙃 I hope to improve more and more to give you a good story. Thanks again to everyone, and hopefully, you enjoy it as much as I enjoy writing.😘😘😘😘😘

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Condemned
CondemnedLv4

It would be hard to get cotnract if there is incest.

LamenThief
LamenThiefAuthor

Excuse me? I'm not sure what you mean. bad English here...

Condemned:It would be hard to get cotnract if there is incest.
Condemned
CondemnedLv4

According to WN editors, it would be hard to get a contract for a book which contains incest.

LamenThief:Excuse me? I'm not sure what you mean. bad English here...
RobertBoss
RobertBossLv4

Has this novel got any action in it, or is it just a harem building novel?

RobertBoss
RobertBossLv4

I'm asking because it sounds really good. I'm just one of those people who love a good story, but there needs to be moments that get my blood boiling. It doesnt need to be the main focus of the novel.

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LamenThief
LamenThiefAuthor

Sorry for being rude. I have some readers who complain about everything and it makes me upset. My story has a little bit of everything (action, adventure, fantasy, etc.) but my focus is on relationships (sometimes sex), mainly in the harem (with the main ones being the MC's sisters and his mother). You could like or not like it, I'm not sure how to answer your question. I also don't know if you are going to get "blood boiling" sometimes. Again I'm sorry for my stupid answer.

RobertBoss:I'm asking because it sounds really good. I'm just one of those people who love a good story, but there needs to be moments that get my blood boiling. It doesnt need to be the main focus of the novel.
RobertBoss
RobertBossLv4

It's all good, I get how some people on this site are really like to judge some peoples work just because it doesnt suit their tastes. I'll give it try and see If I like it.😁

LamenThief:Sorry for being rude. I have some readers who complain about everything and it makes me upset. My story has a little bit of everything (action, adventure, fantasy, etc.) but my focus is on relationships (sometimes sex), mainly in the harem (with the main ones being the MC's sisters and his mother). You could like or not like it, I'm not sure how to answer your question. I also don't know if you are going to get "blood boiling" sometimes. Again I'm sorry for my stupid answer.
pacman_3301
pacman_3301Lv4

Very well written :(

Bored_Reader
Bored_ReaderLv4

I really like this good ****.

Dao_of_Melancholy
Dao_of_MelancholyLv13

Don’t worry about it you do English better than I do and I’m from ENGLAND

Bellaluin
BellaluinLv12

Bro don't worry and continue your good story, don't worry about others because thwy will shut up with consistent updates from your story.

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Op mc??

LamenThief
LamenThiefAuthor

Not at first. I would say fast growth. But I can be wrong. It is difficult to answer with certainty because it has to do with comparison. MC is swift, but in a battle, he counts with his army and partners to win. It is not one man vs. armies.

noobageddon_:Op mc??
Alexhale025
Alexhale025Lv1

I love your webnovel so pls keep up the good work. I am a big fan of your novel so I would like to request for an increase in the chapter realease because the number of chapter release is small and slow. I would like to see this novel go as far as it can if 1000 chapters is possible maybe am over reaching but I want to see more. That how much I love this novel.

IgorDaoist
IgorDaoistLv2

Eu amo o seu livro ❤️ Uma das melhores, provavelmente a melhor, história que eu já vi, continue com seu ótimo trabalho, parabéns!!!

LamenThief
LamenThiefAuthor

Vlw man, tmj.

IgorDaoist:Eu amo o seu livro ❤️ Uma das melhores, provavelmente a melhor, história que eu já vi, continue com seu ótimo trabalho, parabéns!!!
matrix486
matrix486Lv4

Your english is really good. (we are not at Oxford to care about some comma on the wrong spot) Compared to english in some other novels on this site .... well i seen some english on this web that look like they were translated by google without any correction and would give cancer to your eyes just by reading it.

Triple_x
Triple_xLv10

did her mother enter the harem?

LamenThief
LamenThiefAuthor

Not yet, but it's the main goal of this story.

Triple_x:did her mother enter the harem?
Triple_x
Triple_xLv10

I like this,but because he hesitated when he wanted to change the relationship with the saurinya into his woman ... I was a little worried about the direction of the story✌

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