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2022-04-11 09:14

I got to chapter 13 so far. If this got rewritten (and edited) then some chapters and details could be completely deleted. The characters are the only interesting thing, but the random trains of thought take away from the story. I know its the author’s way of building the world, but the info could be worked into the plot better.

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