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Allen_Clay012
Allen_Clay012Lv44yr
2020-09-09 15:25

Your style is different from the novels I read since it doesn't have a lot of prose. The writing style you have is not bad and is actually it is easy to understand. It is good and easy to read, and the flow of the story is good also. I probably got used to reading old fashioned novels or format but it does not matter. There is a lot of reference too that I can relate, especially in the first few chapters. It really did crack a smile on my face and is really entertaining. My verdict for the story is 4.6/5.0. I noticed some minor mistakes in capitalization and spelling but proofreading and some edits can fix them. It's a good story in overall and please do not give up writing. I find it a good read and entertaining at the same time. Thank you for reading this review! The TradeMaker

Transported In Another World As A LoL Summoner

Moe_Cyan_Pile
4.3
306 Chs

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Moe_Cyan_Pile
Moe_Cyan_PileAuthor

i use different writing styles for different novels

4yr
Allen_Clay012
Allen_Clay012Lv4

I see, I will try reading your other books as well. Maybe I can learn a thing or two then hehehe... 😊

4yr
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Haha..did not expect that. I only read your sypnosis but here is a 5 star. I will come back later and read it.. hehe. ^^for now.... (**) 140 characters coming up..I guess

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Moe_Cyan_Pile
Moe_Cyan_PileAuthor

Hello there lovable readers. I'm seeing a lot of positive opinions here and it's nice to see it. Well if your good hearted at least also say your opinion as a form of review pls hehe. (I am so mischievous)

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Infamous_Fitz
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Reveal spoiler

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Marcelinho_Ggazeli
Marcelinho_GgazeliLv10

in the first arc the MC becomes a nobleman's servant, in the second arc the MC becomes the babysitter of a naughty ***** girl with a fetish in principe, but I can't take it and I dropped in the 3 arc, I refuse to see an academy arch, that's a lot bad, every Japanese isekai has this same bow is very bad, the MC wastes all the potential of his system

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reyalSLv4

Can’t stand the childish Mc who wastes the system that they get. He acts like he’s 10 five or take a year. The rambling on without controlling what he says combined with the childish antics is too much and I didn’t even finish the first arc…

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Charlie_Foster_1507
Charlie_Foster_1507Lv1

I only stayed as long as I did for my girl ahri but the story is too cringe and not enough ahri so what is the point of living without my girl ahri!

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Lin_Song
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I've reached until chapter 95 and I can say that this one is a hidden gem. you come close to a typical japanese light novel. the mc is better than most novels out there, there are quite similarities to omniscient reader where there is the isekaied guy, the regressor, the hero and whatnot, the romance part is ok, can you also add more character description. so overall the novel is not bad but i wish you update more chapters and add more interaction scenes with the champions like teemo jumping and hopping around, I hope you can also add the new released champion and skins P.S. I would love to see a scene where he fused with viego and please don't drop this novel

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This is a well-plotted world of gamelit/rpg. As a fan of this genre, this is a novel with great potential. The main characters are well written, especially that of the MC, Shun. (By the way, I don't really like the name). The quality of the writing is very good and the storyline looks interesting. Great job. Sidenote: for picture posting in the forum. I've input your book's code. ![alernatetext](https://img.webnovel.com/bookcover/16198274305157805/300/300.jpg)

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1324_KAPITANTUTAN
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The novel is good and no harem which make it more good along with league of legends! I read the review and Idk what to say to them....... their review is somehow stupid for me.

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