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coffeemugssshotLv114yr
2020-03-03 16:10

I am more into mature or let's just say older novel contents. I passed the age of reading high school novels, but I would say, you're doing a good job author. There are some grammatical errors here and there (not obvious though, so it's fine), some spelling mistake as well, but the way the story slowly progresses, is like it. The challenges and management skills of the ML is superb. I give two and half thumbs up for you.

The Correct Way Of Idol Managing

Kamatis
4.4
49 Chs

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ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiLv4

Omg! The plotline for this is something I would usually go for, and everything is quite intriguing. The story is very much easy to read, and there are not much grammatical errors.

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Delphonse
DelphonseLv13

So far it's kinda funny in the way the Main Character acts. Excited to see where it leads. The wording is a little off but keep up the good work!

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KD_Dix
KD_DixLv2

This usually isn't a type of book I would personally pick out, but I was pleasantly surprised by how organized and efficient the author presented it. It's very in-depth in a professional understanding as well as giving ”highschoolers” a better look as they were exhibited as mature, secure giving, devoted individuals that sought out a dream to become an idol and I honestly believe even with the struggles and the determination of others wanting their downfall, they will succeed! I also wanted to make a point, the ”Manger, ” may have had his struggles, to this day, but with the determination, he broadcasts in gaining the audience to promote the ”Cherry Blossoms, ” I honestly feel that he may like it more then he realizes. Maybe it's not just about the money he will earn by managing this idol club?! One suggestion I would consider is to check out ”Grammarly, ” it is a fantastic program that helps with punctuation and grammatical errors. Within your story, I have noticed a couple of errors, as well as the changing of characters ”Pov.” It can get a little confusing regarding who is talking at the moment; I suggest titling the top of each change though it is nothing major, I believe it will help the flow and overall understanding of your story.

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Daoist_HeavenlyGod
Daoist_HeavenlyGodLv3

I think it is time for me to made my review, tbh this book got a very great potential, I enjoyed reading this one. Hoping author won't drop this, It was very fun for me to read. I absolutely recommend this to all of you guys to read this is very very wonderful book.

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MeriemR
MeriemRLv11

I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!

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evolx24
evolx24Lv2

As many of people said in the comments, Idols are not my cup of tea for two reasons: I've lived in Tokyo and got soo fed up with it and second it is always the same comedy. About the novel, it is actually fun, but you have to like Japanese comedy, otherwise, you just won't get jokes. I personally laughed a lot. Characters are funny and adorable, Araragi kept reminding me of the Monogatari series. And the dark part of my really wanted the whole show to go dark 'à la' Perfect blue... But that's just me, gotta see a doctor :) Overall, if you like reading manage and shonen, I recommend it!

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ReincarnatedSaint
ReincarnatedSaintLv10

Awesome novel. There are very few novel, which attracts my attention in this genre. It was hilarious and It was rate for me to get so much into it. Yeah, I think has a bit of problem with his tenses and singular and plural words. But I think it would improve overtime. Just don't drop it

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Jin_Daoran
Jin_DaoranLv10

Ever since I read Penguin Revolution, I've liked the manager/producer trope in light novels and CNs. The high school drama I could do without, however, since very few writers do it well. In the initial chapter, the MC is immediately plunged into a daily life full of complication, and the subsequent chapters certainly are built well on the foundation of the first. From the first chapter to succeeding chapters, the motivation of the MC to put his best effort into idol managing is also shown, though I look forward to seeing how that motivation matures in the future. He's certainly a go-getter, so it promises to be interesting. While the character of the MC is set up well, I'd like to see a bit more set up in the character of the girls in the chapters following their introductory scenes. The pacing is good, the plot is developing nicely. But, what the heck, if this is discount Haruhi Suzumiya, I will cry. Big fat ugly tears. Author, you are warned~ ;] The grammar is good enough, but needs work. The plot and the MC give the story enough charm that the reader is drawn more and more into the world. This story about the travails of Araragi Hideki, I definitely recommend it. Fight on, Araragi Hideki!

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Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7

It is easy to read, the text block is a little rough, but it does not cause any special complaints. The title page is attractive. The story is fascinating. You can advise those who like to read stories about school and romance. Respect to the author for an interestingly written story!

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MatchaMilk
MatchaMilkLv4

This really heavily reminds me of an anime which ig the author is going for and its nice to see that. The story is cute and I can see in my mind how it unfolds!  The characters are also adorable! There are grammarical mistake and switches between past and present tense, author should settle for one tense. I also think its not really necessary to describe their appearances, we need a bit info about them but going too much into detail is superfluous. I get it tries to go with the anime trope but in a novel or even a light novel, its not really common (correct me tho if im wrong) This would make a good manga tbh! It would be even cooler if it could be a shounen, if you think managing idols and shounen doesnt fit, i highly recommend act age where the mangaka makes striving to become an actress so damn hype. Have you read light novels? I'd suggest looking at them to see how those authors wrote them, although a lot say japanese light novels are trash lol All in all, its a nice, light-hearted story and I hope the author will continue their hard work!

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