Item: The Correct Way Of Idol Managing
Rating: 3.8
Author: MeriemR

MeriemRLv115yr

2020-03-15 04:04

I really think this story has so much potential. I like it so far. I think if the author could improve a few things, it would be more appealing to readers. First of all, the tenses need to be unified, either past or present. Some editing needs to be done as there are many grammatical mistakes. I think there should be more character development, maybe backgrounds, goals, motivation. Something that kinda bothered me was the fact that the author uses both first and last name every time he talks about a characters. I think one is enough, also descriptions are lacking. Great work though, I am sure you will improve with time!! Gambatte kudasai!!

The Correct Way Of Idol Managing

Kamatis

4.4

49 Chs

Liked by 2 people

Replies3

MeriemRLv11

they talk about a character.*

5yr

KamatisAuthor

The main character uses both first name and last name because he wants to. But later in the story, he will use just their first names. It will prove that they've gotten closer

MeriemR:they talk about a character.*

5yr

MeriemRLv11

Ahh I see.

Kamatis:The main character uses both first name and last name because he wants to. But later in the story, he will use just their first names. It will prove that they've gotten closer

5yr

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