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thetinman
thetinmanLv34yr
2020-06-22 02:19

Ah I just came to leave a review but this story is hard to put done once you start. Excellent writing from a seasoned writer! Sigh why do you write so slow. Keep them coming. Any more readers then me who wanna kidnapp the author and force her to complete let the story or is it just? Maybe is just then,sigh. Good work and continue or else-.........

The Entangled Fates

dumdum007
4.8
212 Chs

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dumdum007
dumdum007Author

hahahaha! Thank you so much 🥰 Or else what? 😅

4yr
thetinman
thetinmanLv3

Ah such fate shall not be discussed here. The walls have ears but I hope for you sake that you shall never find out. For such a missery is only for those unfaithful and lazy authors.

dumdum007:hahahaha! Thank you so much 🥰 Or else what? 😅
4yr
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dumdum007
dumdum007Author

Hahahahaha! Sureee,.... May the heavens keep me save from your ruthless plans!

thetinman:Ah such fate shall not be discussed here. The walls have ears but I hope for you sake that you shall never find out. For such a missery is only for those unfaithful and lazy authors.
4yr
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usha412
usha412Lv14

It was hard to part with the chapters to write this review and I delayed it for over a long time. Cough cough, but my conscience forced me to make this tough decision of reviewing it before I entirely read it. Now, back to the main point. Do I seriously write or do I tell what my inner fangirl is telling me? Well, let's go with both the options. Reasons for reading this book: 1. Author has this exceptional style of portraying her innermost thoughts through the most beautiful words in an exquisite way. (Kyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, my inner fangirl is squealing) 2. Characters are extremely detailed and are almost lifelike('What life-like? They are real', my inner fangil is scolding me.) 3. With almost no flaws, she made this world worth drowning in.(I am already drowning. Omg. Omg. They are so cute) 4. Pacing is normal. Neither too fast, nor too slow. Absolutely magical.(duh! It ought to be magical. Omg. Did I say something that I shouldn't? Omg. I am waiting for..... cough cough.... NO spoilers here.) 5. The world background is shown well. ('Hmph!! Why do you use these technical terms?' my inner fangirl chided me.) Okay, now that I have made all the points clear. Lemme squeal with all my strength. Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh.... I am so in love with them. Especially the hot Aden. (*wink) But Author has threatened me with her knife, Tell me, isn't that bullying? Bohohohohohoho. Now, now, I have rambled on and on, and you all might come after me with a knife too, so, I must run now... Read on to find out why I am so excited, okay? Ba bye. This high and mighty one runs before yall run after me for ....... Haha. I won't tell. Cya in the chapters soon.... *wink*

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Alaheeza
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This is by far the best fantasy book I have come across... the main leads are simply so amazing! The book takes you to a wonderful rollr coastr ride of emotions, and trust me, you would only crave for more! I love how, author manages to bring out emotions of every character, and it looks so effortless... (Though I know, how difficult it is.) Proud of you my girl....💙💙💙 Loving the book!!!😍🤗

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Looks promising so far, looking forward to future updates. Will update my review when it has more chapters. .................................................

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priasgs
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Howdy dear author....... 🙋🙋🙋 This story comes under one of my favorite genre😍😘..... A fantasy story between devil n angel...... we have crossed 54 cha**.....up until now I have been a huge fan of ur stories..... As for this story it's a Love... Hate.... Betrayal... Conspiracy....between A Devil our FL n an Angel our ML.... . In one word medley of all emotions.... I recommend this to all other readers that u have to read this story.....coz both the leads have gone through these emotions once n because of the betrayal done by their own family members..... Are incarnated again to fulfill their prophecy of love...... So till now eagerly hooked up to this novel.....n wish our beloved author all the best for the future.... 😍😘💖

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Azure_Sky
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I do hope this story turns out well. I'm very much intrigued by its premise. Good Luck on making it work and I hope people will be as interested as I am in this without being close-minded over it. After reading a while They will definitely enjoy the story. 😍

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This author has a way about captivating readers. The character development was outstanding. The female lead is quite adorable and i love all the wolfy stuff. Sexy and classy and not too mention kinda hot. I give it 5 stars so far

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djmimi37
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Love this book but Its Killing me to get notifications new chapters added but they really arent!! May wait until finished before read again!

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the story plot is very interesting plus the author has very nice writting skills it will catch you up. But be sure to judge the book only after you have read plenty of chapters

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First you have the two lost souls genre, people with superpowers and characters with personlaties. I am all down for this story and i can’t wait for more!!!

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