Item: The Entangled Fates
Rating: 4.8
Author: usha412

usha412Lv144yr

2020-06-16 01:39

It was hard to part with the chapters to write this review and I delayed it for over a long time. Cough cough, but my conscience forced me to make this tough decision of reviewing it before I entirely read it. Now, back to the main point. Do I seriously write or do I tell what my inner fangirl is telling me? Well, let's go with both the options. Reasons for reading this book: 1. Author has this exceptional style of portraying her innermost thoughts through the most beautiful words in an exquisite way. (Kyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, my inner fangirl is squealing) 2. Characters are extremely detailed and are almost lifelike('What life-like? They are real', my inner fangil is scolding me.) 3. With almost no flaws, she made this world worth drowning in.(I am already drowning. Omg. Omg. They are so cute) 4. Pacing is normal. Neither too fast, nor too slow. Absolutely magical.(duh! It ought to be magical. Omg. Did I say something that I shouldn't? Omg. I am waiting for..... cough cough.... NO spoilers here.) 5. The world background is shown well. ('Hmph!! Why do you use these technical terms?' my inner fangirl chided me.) Okay, now that I have made all the points clear. Lemme squeal with all my strength. Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh.... I am so in love with them. Especially the hot Aden. (*wink) But Author has threatened me with her knife, Tell me, isn't that bullying? Bohohohohohoho. Now, now, I have rambled on and on, and you all might come after me with a knife too, so, I must run now... Read on to find out why I am so excited, okay? Ba bye. This high and mighty one runs before yall run after me for ....... Haha. I won't tell. Cya in the chapters soon.... *wink*

The Entangled Fates

dumdum007

4.8

212 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies3

dumdum007Author

Danggg!!! The best review on this story so far!!! Thank you so much for finally taking out time from your busy routine (or else I would have to come after you with my knife). Love you loads (I guess you already know this) 🥰❤😍😘

4yr

usha412Lv14

Well, yeah I know but pretend to not know so that I get to hear it. Haha. Also keep ur knife away. Omg. And, it's not a problem my dear... I really loved your story... ❤️❤️ Love you loads too❤️❤️❤️❤️

dumdum007:Danggg!!! The best review on this story so far!!! Thank you so much for finally taking out time from your busy routine (or else I would have to come after you with my knife). Love you loads (I guess you already know this) 🥰❤😍😘

4yr

dumdum007Author

*squeals with delight* Smooches for you! 🥰❤😍😘 and I will be keeping my knife away (for now).

usha412:Well, yeah I know but pretend to not know so that I get to hear it. Haha. Also keep ur knife away. Omg. And, it's not a problem my dear... I really loved your story... ❤️❤️ Love you loads too❤️❤️❤️❤️

4yr

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