Review Detail of Voryn987 in Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}

Writing quality is decent itself with proper grammar, and the author seems to consistently update this story which is good, he uses Naruto as the world background (reason for 5 stars on it) however his character design is terrible. He says the character will not be OP at the start however within the first few chapters he’s too strong at a very young age. He seems to one day just walk into the academy and instantly graduate (no chapter showing his previous time spent at the academy??? Wtf?) no one in the academy knows him and everyone is surprised by him, Sakura and ino for seemingly no reason start an ‘arguement’ where mc tells them to shut up and then walks away - this (ino) says is ‘cute’?? And Sakura in a cliche way says “oh he can’t beat my sasuke” (not exactly but roughly same lines) then he sits down waiting for the teacher and he has a genin test (again, no chapter showing his previous training? Wtf author?) he passes the test perfectly and then it shows two people (I assume the, to be danzo and some root person) talking about mc and think he is a spy (author again, wtf why are u not writing anything for them to think that or show mc previous actions), then he meets his Jonin sensei which is Anko but he’s arrogant and says “spar with me.” And says “I won’t call someone master unless their stronger than me” (again roughly what he says) they spar and apparently gai and his team is nearby and of course there’s gotta be insults there to make his shocking victory over Anko seem more impressive. He easily beats her breaking no sweat over it and the. Offers to remove her curse seal again, I assume he’s 7- 8 or same age as original cast, wtf a 7-8 year old is so skilled and memorised in fuinjutsu that he can easily deal with Orochimaru curse seal, which kind you is an art that even jiraya couldn’t undo. Next chapter has him absorb the seal into himself (absorbing Orochimaru soul, which why isn’t their a scene showing Orochimaru feeling his soul being move / absorbed? It’s a soul bro) but then Anko goes crazy and then they’re in the hokage office where hiruzen is saying “are you sure ur not connected with him” (him being Orochimaru) and hiruzen says “your not a spy right” (like bro wtf a spy would never admit he is to the leader of an enemy camp) I got up to that point and simply couldn’t force myself to read anymore. The author simply lies and I don’t mean to hate but this story was terrible and made me want to kill myself. I sincerely don’t understand why so many people gave a rating of 4 or 5 stars but they didn’t read the same book I did. Perhaps I may have set the bar high but I don’t think having proper grammar, explanations and a bit of background is hard to do (this coming from a writer - me on AO3, you can find me as Taloso or Voryn) Author I suggest you get better at writing.