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Airelda
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2022-03-12 08:39

This is a very good story as of chapter 92. I love how the MC doesn't know the plot, doesn't really have a golden finger come out of nowhere, and truly feels that in an AU of Harry Potter he can actually exist. He also doesn't try to become the KING of everything and only goes on to excel in the things that actually interest him. He also doesn't become a tail for the trio and they only cross paths because of his family history and his friends clashing with them. As for his changing cannon, it is natural since he is a Slytherin and he wants to know his heritage, and since Voldy was also a Slytherin the MCs actions change what Harry experiences on his way to defeat Voldy.

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Hello, This is Snowstar. Author of this novel. There a few things that I would like to say about the novel that readers must know. Those who don't like to know even a tiny bit of spoiler, Ignore this and proceed. As for those who want to know what this is about, Please continue. 1. The protagonist of the novel, Neal Slytherin is the direct descendant of Salazar Slytherin and not a descendant from the House of Gaunt like Voldemort. 2. Neal won't be too cold or arrogant like how everyone expects Slytherin to be. He might act friendlier towards strangers because he was taught to do like that from his Orphanage where he grew up. But that's it. 3. Neal won't be like a hero who forgives anyone or helps others. He's a Grey MC. Please don't judge him at the starting chapters. 4. Neal won't involve much in Harry's events and have his own story. So, aside from interaction from time to time, they don't be involved much in each other stories. 5. While the overall plot doesn't change, the story between start and end might be the same or different. 6. The progress of MC training the spells can't be shown as it's a bit boring process for me to write as well as take too much space and time to research about it. So, please don't think how did MC knows such strong spells or something like that. After all, this is not some jutsu or sword technique training that needs to take a lot of time. All it needs his comprehension. MC is being portraited as the most talented student and often gets compared to Voldemort indirectly from time to time. Although he still might need a lot of training when it comes to real battles. 7. History sometimes will be changed from the original to my comfort for the story. So, please don't point out that it is wrong and it isn't that way on the books or movies 8. And finally, the most important point in fanfic that everyone curious about. Is this a Harem or not? The answer is "NO". MC will end up with only one person. As for who it is, it will remain as a question mark until the end of the novel. Please do comment, Add to Library and Vote power stones to support me, if you like the novel.

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