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Have read up to chapter 82. I'm giving up on this one. The grammar is bad. The author leaves out random words that change the meaning of the sentence. Constantly uses adjectives in place of nouns. Just plain uses the wrong words...but even leaving that aside, there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT for the MC. Every other character develops as a person, but the MC is completely static. He gets more powerful, and the author EXPLAINS how mature and wise he is. However, he hasn't changed or developed at all since the beginning of the story. I'm done with it.

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Ascenders Rift

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