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Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv145yr
2020-02-10 10:25

Slice of life with death of loved ones? Are the deaths natural causes or something? If not then that's pretty confusing. Isn't slice of life for when there is no real struggle just everyday normality?

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Aidka
AidkaAuthor

Yeah...

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

You don't have to answer this but will any of the harem die?

Aidka:Yeah...
newthings
newthingsLv6

who dies?

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

So far? No one the MC knows. The MC's adopted mother lost her daughter in the first chapter and it looks like the adopted mother will die soon also.

newthings:who dies?
newthings
newthingsLv6

still no one died?

Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

---------- SPOILER ALERT--------- X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X. X X One person and one Ai died.

newthings:still no one died?
newthings
newthingsLv6

who?

Malcolm_Massey:---------- SPOILER ALERT--------- X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X X. X X One person and one Ai died.
Malcolm_Massey
Malcolm_MasseyLv14

Camilla and tito

newthings:who?
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