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EndlessParadox
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A complete ripoff of marvel’s strongest father only difference is in the names and a bit of the plot. At least try to make it more original FFs

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A Father In Marvel

Flat_Moon

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EndlessParadox
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Correction I have checked again since I haven’t read marvel’s strongest father in a while and this Is exactly ripped of from it names and all only difference is it happens later in the marvel timeline

EndlessParadox
EndlessParadoxLv11EndlessParadox

Correction I have checked again since I haven’t read marvel’s strongest father in a while and this Is exactly ripped of from it names and all only difference is it happens later in the marvel timeline

Flat_Moon
Flat_MoonAuthorFlat_Moon

Hi, this is the author you might have not looked at the name but I wrote Marvels Strongest Father. Just search my name Flat_Moon and it will come up with all the novels I have written. This is a rewrite as I dropped the other one.

EndlessParadox
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I checked and hereby apologise for my statement did not notice the author’s name 🤣

Flat_Moon:Hi, this is the author you might have not looked at the name but I wrote Marvels Strongest Father. Just search my name Flat_Moon and it will come up with all the novels I have written. This is a rewrite as I dropped the other one.
Flat_Moon
Flat_MoonAuthorFlat_Moon

Nah it's cool

EndlessParadox:I checked and hereby apologise for my statement did not notice the author’s name 🤣
EndlessParadox
EndlessParadoxLv11EndlessParadox

Hey can I ask your advice I have a idea for a novel but no experience in writing any idea on how I should start?

EndlessParadox
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Hey can you give me some advice on how to write a novel as I have a idea for a fanfic but no knowledge how to start or go about it?

Flat_Moon:Nah it's cool
Flat_Moon
Flat_MoonAuthorFlat_Moon

Honestly, it's mostly trial and error. Though I would say that you should try and make the first chapter the best it can be. I've scrapped and rewrote the first chapter of my novels at least 5 times. For me, the first chapter should be able to convey two things. 1 is the main character's goals and 2 the personality. Though this differs depending on the age of your character cause if your Mc is young then he's understandably still growing. I pick 18 and up for an age range as thier is some naivety and maturity that you can play with. The second chapter is the same as the first chapter but a discussion of the steps necessary to reach the said goals. Though this could be done in the first chapter. For me, I've never been good with planning so I just let things flow and take on the readers ideas. If you do a system make sure to create a separate draft chapter that has the status. Keep the chapter update so that you can just copy and paste it on chapters where the Mc asks for status. Download Grammarly it's saved me a lot of time. Lastly, always remember that everyone has there own preferences so don't let it get to you when they say it's bad or have a separate opinion but take note as thier opinions can be constructive. I'll keep my eye out for an EndlessParadox novel. Best of luck to you fellow writer.

EndlessParadox:Hey can you give me some advice on how to write a novel as I have a idea for a fanfic but no knowledge how to start or go about it?
Hentai_Senchou
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You should delete your review. It's bringing the stories rating down just because you didn't realize that it was the author doing a rewrite

EndlessParadox:Hey can you give me some advice on how to write a novel as I have a idea for a fanfic but no knowledge how to start or go about it?
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

You should delete your review. It's bringing the stories rating down just because you didn't realize that it was the author doing a rewrite.

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

You should delete your review. It's bringing the stories rating down just because you didn't realize that it was the author doing a rewrite.

InnerVoice
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Too much work