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Sigh! I am honestly at a loss right now. The writing quality and stability of updates are great and the character design is ok as well but what does your story have to do with DXD at all. The story is cluttered with too much. The actual world she is reborn in has dungeons and monsters and people who awaken with powers but the world is not even explored at all. In fact the mc's awakening is not even mentioned other than as a throwaway comment while playing a game that is equivalent to her game status. There are characters that oddly resemble other anime characters with their names and powers and weaponry in-game and out of it. Sigh! And then she is transported to another world which I think is based on some other story about an mc dressed as a teddy. It's too much. Author san God speed too ya but I give up.