Review Detail of Sigheti in :) deleted

An engaging an overall charming story that I truly enjoyed. While there are only six chapters out, the author succeeds in catching our attention with a wonderful storyline and characters that continue to be appealing and winsome. The only criticism I might have is the rhythm. I wish to clearly state that I do not succeed in this myself, but it remains such an important part of writing, and I seldom find anyone who succeeds in writing with good rhythm that I shall keep pointing it out to everyone who will hear of it. I believe the author did an absolute splendid job and look forward to seeing more of you in the future.