Review Detail of WikiLover in Machine God of the Multiverse

Confusing af that’s all I have to say. The start is weird, 1/3rd of this novel is copy pasted text from previous chapters, the why and how dio does some things is ignored, the plot is nonexistent but seems to follow some path the author has in his head. This stuff is confusing but written well so it’s not all bad. If the author sees this here is my suggestion; open a word doc and write the intro of your novel at the top and the end of your novel at the bottom, in between put simple summaries of what you want to happen and add some blank events so you can add stuff in later, then fill in the space between your novels intro and the first event with the how, how will your character get here, how will their getting here affect future events etc... then do this for the space between each event and you’ll have a basic roadmap. With the roadmap and your already top notch grammar and spelling I think you could easily beat out most authors on webnovel.