Review Detail of DarthVegito in The Lost Fruits
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Was enjoying this story and then the MC asks a genie to remove his devil fruit weaknesses(water) and the author makes it so he isn’t a Logia anymore so physical attacks hurt him ... sooo essentially our MC became a fire wizard and I dropped it after that happened
The Lost Fruits
Doragon
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I haven’t read the story so this will be fairly unbiased. If you knew your character was to OP in the setting he was placed then whyuse him as your character. If you wanted a fire wizard I’m sure there are other alternatives
Doragon:Alright, then explain to me why is my decision is so bad and how would you or him have done it better. there is no haki in this world, Ace is already OP enough, you guys call my decision"bad" because i decided to make Ace part of the world and set some event gears for my story. If it is really so bad, Hiw about you now give me a little insight of how the story will progress with Ace being immune to everything (including water, as that was his wish)
Crap after seeing your comment I am going to read this story and put it in my library. I like your style.
Doragon:You are a genius! Never seen someone like you before! It is a Shame that you dropped it, I am sad.
You act like they are to blame for being set off at your decision that could ruin your story when you don't even go on to explain the story's Future more then your horribly ambiguous reply's to people talking bad about your story, From what i see he is 100% right to think like he dose cause he's not the only one.
Doragon:You are a genius! Never seen someone like you before! It is a Shame that you dropped it, I am sad.
Alright, then explain to me why is my decision is so bad and how would you or him have done it better. there is no haki in this world, Ace is already OP enough, you guys call my decision"bad" because i decided to make Ace part of the world and set some event gears for my story. If it is really so bad, Hiw about you now give me a little insight of how the story will progress with Ace being immune to everything (including water, as that was his wish)
EverlastingBoner:You act like they are to blame for being set off at your decision that could ruin your story when you don't even go on to explain the story's Future more then your horribly ambiguous reply's to people talking bad about your story, From what i see he is 100% right to think like he dose cause he's not the only one.
Doragon:Alright, then explain to me why is my decision is so bad and how would you or him have done it better. there is no haki in this world, Ace is already OP enough, you guys call my decision"bad" because i decided to make Ace part of the world and set some event gears for my story. If it is really so bad, Hiw about you now give me a little insight of how the story will progress with Ace being immune to everything (including water, as that was his wish)
Funone:I haven’t read the story so this will be fairly unbiased. If you knew your character was to OP in the setting he was placed then whyuse him as your character. If you wanted a fire wizard I’m sure there are other alternatives
Oh shut up mate. OP is good but OP on top of being immune to everything? That’s boring as F. The author did right by his story. If you want to read some boring story where the MC just nuke everyone and everything from beginning to end then go somewhere else
Lord_Snow:lol any story that nerfmc is trash and not worth reading thanks for letting people know.
Don’t listen to those fools. They don’t know what they’re talking about. You did good and remember, in this story you are the god. Write whatever your heart tells you. Accept helpful criticism and ignore hateful comments that simply aren’t true. They say your story sucks cause the MC isn’t invincible on all front well they’re wrong. Story like that are boring as heck and most likely be drop by most. Nerfing ace made him more HUMAN, he’s still strong but isn’t invincible. It leaves room for development instead of Mc nuking everyone and everything in sight
Doragon:Man, it is the law of give and take, in order to gain something, you have to lose something.
It would be better if he lost his elemental body when he gone to the other world because of the "world laws" and then made a wish for just waterproofing 😁. If you. Can rewrite that you will shut up the haters. Well its your novel, so you're choice .
Doragon:Alright, then explain to me why is my decision is so bad and how would you or him have done it better. there is no haki in this world, Ace is already OP enough, you guys call my decision"bad" because i decided to make Ace part of the world and set some event gears for my story. If it is really so bad, Hiw about you now give me a little insight of how the story will progress with Ace being immune to everything (including water, as that was his wish)