Poor english Sloppy writting style No originality. Almost plagiarized from another twin naruto fanfic Plain and undeveloped characters. But the idea was good at first
BlueObserver
Liked it!
Bruh the other fix you are talking about came out a year after this so it can’t be plagiarized
And the characters lack emotion and are too plain, text-book like
I admit I am quite harsh. I apologize. But my opinion is still the same.