Review Detail of chamanm in The Adventures of Naruto & Scarlet

I usualy don't review but seeing all the 5 star review here is unusual because from what i see now (im at chapter 20) the story is good dont get me wrong I would give 5 star... if only the writing wasnt that bad, I see some words missing in sentence one chapter I think he messed up the name and the construction of your sentence is weird, the only thing I can say is get an editor or strive to rework your chapter before sending more new chapter... good story tho and will continu to read it.