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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv54yrYuri_is_Ntr

Look here, let's be honest for a second. It's horrible. Grammar is like mtl and pace is totally like Chinese watery-story, where authors writes fillers and sprinkle some story in between..... There people who said it's copy/translate from fantasy system, I don't know, don't read it. But feels like one, even without people pointed out. We have standard character, who even though reincarnated/transmitted to anime world, act exactly like beta anime protagonist. With Chinese love for lengthy useless story and law of cencure, I don't see it go in real harem with r-18 scenes, so tags is fraud(maybe). Action tag - are you joking? With pace like caterpillar and starting skills only in cooking? (of course guy don't have any skills from his past life) Anyway, more generic story, hard to find.

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Oh yeah, he/she/it is constant problem so if you have good(or bad) imagination, expect to get some gender-fluid story, about girl love-or guys love.....

Anon20K
Anon20KAuthorAnon20K

I appreciate the assessment, really as you can deduce my native language is not English and I'm not very orthodox in it, but little by little I will improve or I hope so, thanks for your criticism.

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Yeah, feel bad for being asshole. But I don't like those kind of Chinese /anime slice-of-life stuff. They just beyond good and evil, of how boring they become. Eh, though before I was in one autor, naybe you read, shoujo grand summoning, even with all silly stuff, and boring moments - I still like it. But then autor of this stuff, go money/over his love for original anime, and was hit hard by Chinese censureship, so it's all come down to soulless ****..... Yeah, no thanks.

Anon20K:I appreciate the assessment, really as you can deduce my native language is not English and I'm not very orthodox in it, but little by little I will improve or I hope so, thanks for your criticism.
ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13ExaltedCrow

Yup agree with what you said. It being somewhat a copy of “fantasy system” isn’t really a problem overall I would say. The gender pronouns and how the author jumps from MC being a somewhat alpha to a beta is (I mean the story started with MC bedding a girl, so why is he so beta?).

Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6Hentai_Senchou

Everyone that uses pot of greed is scum

ExaltedCrow:Yup agree with what you said. It being somewhat a copy of “fantasy system” isn’t really a problem overall I would say. The gender pronouns and how the author jumps from MC being a somewhat alpha to a beta is (I mean the story started with MC bedding a girl, so why is he so beta?).
squirrelmaster
squirrelmasterLv1squirrelmaster

Im pretty sure the author speaks spanish