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Anon20K

Anon20K

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Un pequeño autor proveniente de Wattpad

2018-10-23 JoinedChile
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Kurotora

    I must have made a mistake, it happens.

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to I_LOVE_MEGUMIN

    So far no one, he is just a kid and I think it is preferable to strengthen the plot, which as many mention is quite weak.

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to GP_Genius666

    why doesn't your review appear in the story... I don't quite understand your anger, but I'm glad you delivered your point of view. Thank you my friend. 👍👍

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Zzz_808

    yes, it has some mistakes but it's not my style to make characters that can defeat everyone from the beginning, I like naive characters in the beginning, that mature and change over time. Of course your review is appreciated because I can see OTHER people's comments, thanks for the summary of comments.

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Fi3l

    Excellent idea

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: Norberta
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to nur_aqidah

    I totally agree, unfortunately William is not me.

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to tear_drop

    thanks, I really try to do my best to keep the story moving at a good pace.

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Missing_Teeth

    but that's harry potter xD

    Christmas finally arrived at Hogwarts, it wasn't just around the corner, it was in the castle.
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Darius_Chromwell

    Yes, I have some mistakes, I will pay more attention in the future.

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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to grimmhorizon

    Jajajajaja xD

    Ch 22 Chapter 22: The Limits of Imagination
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to DaoistzuVmua

    por que aun no es tiempo de brillar xD

    Ch 12 Chapter 12: The first classes
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to LordPhenex026

    nah

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    Zero no Tsukaima: Betsu no sekai no kagaku-sha
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Daoist558845

    es un arco especial pero pronto seguire con la historia principal

    Ch 157 IF 02: La enfermedad se propaga
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    el gran sistema de fantasía de anime
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to AnonimusParker

    la verdad estaba un poco desconectado ya que trabajo en el desarrollo de algunos eroges pero intentare volver mas seguido y actualizar lo mas pronto posible.

    Ch 156 IF 01: Misión fallida
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to GabCad

    si, estoy acumulando ideas xD

    Ch 157 IF 02: La enfermedad se propaga
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Rapid_Cougar_3

    I am working for that

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    Sistema Naruto en el mundo DxD
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to zeedragneel

    I am working for that

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    Sistema Naruto en el mundo DxD
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to Tito_Falxus

    soy buena persona, le deje a la santa de Asia

    "¡Haru es increíble!" exclamo Issei contento mirando la habilidad de su hermano
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K2yr
    Replied to daoist832572

    exactaamente, tengo varios planes para la historia y esta es una manera para revivirla, un pequeño arco

    Ch 156 IF 01: Misión fallida
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  • Anon20K
    Anon20K3yr
    Replied to Kitsune_Raijin

    Gracias Men, estas críticas son las necesarias para crecer como autor y reconocer los fallos. Es como dices el comienzo tiene muchos fallos y aunque lo esté intentando arreglar ahora no es suficiente.

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