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2021-06-06 21:37

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Breaking Limits: A DBZ Fan-fic

Archer_Phoenix
4.6
63 Chs

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Commonnerfer
CommonnerferLv4

If this is like anything to be a hero, then I know I will love it. So just waiting to the chapter count gets higher so I can binge it. I have to do that a lot because the amount of times i end up rereading entire stories because I forgot characters and the plot. Especially if it’s like 1 time a week upload. Can’t wait to read it though.

5yr

S1m0nW1rt3
S1m0nW1rt3Lv11

This is a very goooooooooooood fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please continue writing !!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE THE OC BECAUSE ITS A NEW TYPE OF FANFICTION I HAVENT SEEN BEFORE!

5yr
Otakubro
OtakubroLv4

Aahhh why cant there be like 1000 chapters if there was ide binge till i drop lol........................................................................................................................................

5yr
GhastlyWolf
GhastlyWolfLv1

If I wrote something like this... It would run parallel with the anime. Where Goku would meet his long lost older sister "Kumiko" after the defeat of Frieza. I have no intention of making cross-overs, kinda defeats the purpose of the lore of the anime/manga. But I do find inspiration from other writer's works.

5yr
Henrion
HenrionLv4

This isn't bad, but it's not good either. The writing quality is great, and it's updated frequently. There are a couple of things that drag the story down though. Firstly, the protagonist's progression. The protagonist is growing strong very fast, but that's not the main issue. She's quickly befriending characters, and getting things from them. Other that that, they have no effect on the plot. It makes them feel two dimensional, like their only purpose in the story is to make the protagonist stronger. Secondly, the romance feels rushed. There's very little chemistry between the protagonist and the main love interest. It became more common shortly before they started behaving intimately. I can see there was an attempt at making it gradual, but the change still felt sudden, and broke my immersion. This is a good way to pass the time, if you haven't got anything better to read. I'll continue reading it, since it's got potential. I hope it improves in the future.

5yr
DaoMaster1091
DaoMaster1091Lv3

Just really boring.......i have read many dragon ball fanfictions but i am seeing a trend that they are all so boring. They find themselves in DBZ world, train to up their power level, eat, fight bad guys, train to up their power level, etcetera.

4yr
Farah_ageeli
Farah_ageeliLv14

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2yr
Adalwulf
AdalwulfLv12

I can't wait for the next chapter to come out! I love the plot and constant interesting events. I am also happy that there is one more great lesbian romance online as well. It's a combination of most of my favorite genres! Sure, it could be better, but I love it so far and I'm really looking forward to further updates.

4yr
homeofthelostqueen
homeofthelostqueenLv2

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