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TheOneWithBooks
TheOneWithBooksLv154yr
2020-06-01 10:05

This is such a messed up novel, I didn't understand anything....clearly I am yo dumb for this one good lick other readers. Will not recommend to others

Humanity Online: World Sanctuary

Seshata
4.8
113 Chs

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Seshata
SeshataAuthor

Sorry you felt that way. Could you provide your reasoning? How far did you get? Just want to know what was confusing for future reference!

4yr
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MountBewitchYou
MountBewitchYouLv5

More like he missed the reading comprehension classes in school. Also judging by his sentences his handle on the use of the English language is quite low. So maybe before giving such low unfounded reviews he should first make an effort to improve his level of English so that he could actually understand what the author has written. You have no idea how happy you make me when reading your story. Not only because it's such an engaging read but also because of the grammar and syntax you use. The level of the English used in a big number of the original novels is so bad it makes my head hurt. I usually close out of a book if there's no improvement in the grammar after the 10th chapter so I am really happy with your novel. Will continue to wait for the next chapters.

4yr
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TheOneWithBooks
TheOneWithBooksLv15

Getting very personal?? I am sorry that I have a opinion, you are right to have a opinion too, but it does not need to be personal.

MountBewitchYou:More like he missed the reading comprehension classes in school. Also judging by his sentences his handle on the use of the English language is quite low. So maybe before giving such low unfounded reviews he should first make an effort to improve his level of English so that he could actually understand what the author has written. You have no idea how happy you make me when reading your story. Not only because it's such an engaging read but also because of the grammar and syntax you use. The level of the English used in a big number of the original novels is so bad it makes my head hurt. I usually close out of a book if there's no improvement in the grammar after the 10th chapter so I am really happy with your novel. Will continue to wait for the next chapters.
4yr
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MountBewitchYou
MountBewitchYouLv5

Not really personal. It's just, you wrote that you didn't understand anything. If so, on what basis did you write that the novel is a mess. For me at least, to say that a novel is bad you have to actually understand what you are reading, the characters' thought process or the world around them, or at least what the author is choosing to show us at that moment. And there are a lot of those in the novel. If your problem with the novel is because you can't understand the meaning behind the words in the text than for me you just lack the skill to properly comprehend a text. But if you properly understood what you read and still chose to say that is a mess than by all means properly explain what is a mess in a critical way so that the author can make note of it and improve. That is the point in leaving a review. The problem with I had with your comment is that not that you didn't like the novel. Different people different tastes. But if you're going to leave a bad sounding review at least explain yourself properly. If not than don't leave one at all. That is a personal pet peeve of mine so I might of been quite harsh but I still stand by what I wrote so I won't apologize.

TheOneWithBooks:Getting very personal?? I am sorry that I have a opinion, you are right to have a opinion too, but it does not need to be personal.
4yr
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TheOneWithBooks
TheOneWithBooksLv15

I agree, I have been too harsh with my comment and should leave a proper review when I have time, I will retract my review, thank you for taking time to explain your point, it helped me better understand my own.

4yr
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Sani_H
Sani_HLv3

you said its not personal then said its a personal pet peeve so you won't apologize 😂😂 sounds personal then no?

MountBewitchYou:Not really personal. It's just, you wrote that you didn't understand anything. If so, on what basis did you write that the novel is a mess. For me at least, to say that a novel is bad you have to actually understand what you are reading, the characters' thought process or the world around them, or at least what the author is choosing to show us at that moment. And there are a lot of those in the novel. If your problem with the novel is because you can't understand the meaning behind the words in the text than for me you just lack the skill to properly comprehend a text. But if you properly understood what you read and still chose to say that is a mess than by all means properly explain what is a mess in a critical way so that the author can make note of it and improve. That is the point in leaving a review. The problem with I had with your comment is that not that you didn't like the novel. Different people different tastes. But if you're going to leave a bad sounding review at least explain yourself properly. If not than don't leave one at all. That is a personal pet peeve of mine so I might of been quite harsh but I still stand by what I wrote so I won't apologize.
4yr
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Hey Peeps, Author Here! As I conclude Volume One, I thought I should explain a few things. First, I will be moving to Daily Updates. My chapters run on the longer side, so only one chapter a day for now. This novel doesn’t fly through plot like some others, but if you like well-developed storylines, vivid imagery and action, and high-quality writing, this is the story for you! I have the entire storyline mapped out, and MC will always be moving toward that final epic climax. Though it includes all the fun gamer story tropes, one thing that makes this novel different is the weaving of world mythologies throughout the storyline. From weapons to mobs to game maps, real mythical or legendary elements come into play. I also include some historical or mythical context in the Author Notes from time to time, if that kind of thing interests you! I try to balance action and deep or dark elements with humor, so it’s the kind of story that is both gritty and giggle-inducing. There will not be a harem; MC falls fast and hard for a badass FL, though there will be other female characters in general (SAO-style). The romance will be similar to SAO, in that it exists and is fun and leads to its own misadventures and social awkwardness, but it’s not what moves the plot. I hope you enjoy Humanity Online: World Sanctuary!

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The author is giving their all in the world development of this tale of a forcefully retired pro gamer on his rise back to the top in a new, experimental VRMMORPG. Their extensive knowledge of video games is coupled with their love of mythos and lore. I wait with bated breath for every chapter.

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