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LOPOSdLv104yr
2020-04-30 10:41

I'm a big fan of I Have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World, I Found A Planet and Scholar’s Advanced Technological System. So I was quite excited to read this novel because I thought it would be in the same vein. As the story progress, I realize this story is absolute crap. The translation is excellent and the English flows smoothly but they couldn't save the abysmal quality of the plot and character designs. The mc is endowed with a system from a parallel universe with technology hundred thousand years more advanced than Earth and yet the mc decides the best use of the system is to be a street thug, a gamer and then a bodyguard - it was at that moment I decided to drop it. The story is not worth reading. There are much better novels out there, especially the ones I listed at the beginning of the post.

The Genius System Without Equal

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2.8
859 Chs

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Silver_Devil_Panda
Silver_Devil_PandaLv13

My opinion is even if it’s way advance he still limited by how to get reactions in a constant way. I’m can’t think of many others but I say he made the best of it. He wasn’t a street thug he saved a girl from a child slave ring and those thugs came to him he used the system to save himself. With that accident he was then offered a job being a bodyguard, and while he was being a bodyguard to observe the person he needs to protect he plays games which started to hit it off but he never become a Pro gamer with live-streaming platform. Am I saying it’s original, unpredictable and totally cultivating? No but is it fun to read yeah it is. My anguish with the novel is that the MC doesn’t actively try to get more reactions out of people and sometimes it doesn’t feel like they count some reactions and sometimes they just give stupidly high reaction points. Also even later on as of “180” the MC vibe might read thug, killer, psycho. I feel it’s pretty founded. As the leader he takes actions in what he believes is max efficiency and does things to the best of his abilities.

4yr
Cawcaw
CawcawLv4

Regret?

Silver_Devil_Panda:My opinion is even if it’s way advance he still limited by how to get reactions in a constant way. I’m can’t think of many others but I say he made the best of it. He wasn’t a street thug he saved a girl from a child slave ring and those thugs came to him he used the system to save himself. With that accident he was then offered a job being a bodyguard, and while he was being a bodyguard to observe the person he needs to protect he plays games which started to hit it off but he never become a Pro gamer with live-streaming platform. Am I saying it’s original, unpredictable and totally cultivating? No but is it fun to read yeah it is. My anguish with the novel is that the MC doesn’t actively try to get more reactions out of people and sometimes it doesn’t feel like they count some reactions and sometimes they just give stupidly high reaction points. Also even later on as of “180” the MC vibe might read thug, killer, psycho. I feel it’s pretty founded. As the leader he takes actions in what he believes is max efficiency and does things to the best of his abilities.
4yr
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

Wat about NTR in chapter 220

Silver_Devil_Panda:My opinion is even if it’s way advance he still limited by how to get reactions in a constant way. I’m can’t think of many others but I say he made the best of it. He wasn’t a street thug he saved a girl from a child slave ring and those thugs came to him he used the system to save himself. With that accident he was then offered a job being a bodyguard, and while he was being a bodyguard to observe the person he needs to protect he plays games which started to hit it off but he never become a Pro gamer with live-streaming platform. Am I saying it’s original, unpredictable and totally cultivating? No but is it fun to read yeah it is. My anguish with the novel is that the MC doesn’t actively try to get more reactions out of people and sometimes it doesn’t feel like they count some reactions and sometimes they just give stupidly high reaction points. Also even later on as of “180” the MC vibe might read thug, killer, psycho. I feel it’s pretty founded. As the leader he takes actions in what he believes is max efficiency and does things to the best of his abilities.
4yr
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zouave
zouaveLv11

I am gonna try reading the 2nd and 3rd novel you listed. I hope it doesn't degenrate into racist novel mid to late game.

4yr
Mumbajumba
MumbajumbaLv5

ı found a planet is nationalist as Fuck

zouave:I am gonna try reading the 2nd and 3rd novel you listed. I hope it doesn't degenrate into racist novel mid to late game.
4yr
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newthings
newthingsLv6

This is one of the review from novel-updates """ It's tolerable for the first 150 chapters, I read 150 - 400 chapters simply because I invested time into the story and didnt want to drop it. Chapters 400 - 640 was pure sh*t and 640 is where I dropped it because all it was for the last 250 chapters was Chinese nationalism. From chapters 400+, the MC was supposed to work with american soldiers to save a journalist. After the MC saves the journalists, it is just american soldiers ****ting on china and the soldiers using derogatory terms towards the MC. After the mission to save the journalist was over they decide to kill the MC because he is Chinese (ofc). The MC kills all the American soldiers and goes back to china. The next mission is going to japan (you should know where this is going). Same thing as above. Chinese people abducted by Japanese people. Japanese people say sh*t bad sh*t about Chinese people. MC kills people for being evil. Next mission MC goes to america and fresh off the plane, people he knows are being bullied and insulted for being Chinese. I dropped the novel right there because all this novel became was some sick hate driven garbage. Im over it. """

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Godlymounttie
GodlymounttieLv3

This is the best novel I've ever read I'm a fucking cuck that's why I like it and everyone that likes this is also a cuck I'm an Incel and everyone else that likes this is an incel I'm a misogynist so everyone that likes this amazing work of art is a misogynist I like my girl getting ****ed in front of me and everyone one else that likes this is the same I'm a white knight and everyone else that likes this is also a white knight I am mentally retarded and everyone else that likes this novel is mentally retarded too I ****ed my mom and everyone that likes this novel also live in Alabama I am a beta Male and everyone else that likes this is a beta Male Ps:give me a upvote and salute in the comments section as I have sacrificed myself 😢

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Shadizar
ShadizarLv6

So, seems like bad reviews are getting blocked/removed, I wonder how many have expressed negative opinions about this and been removed leaving mainly positive comments.

4yr
Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv13

11th time my review has been taken down be warned this novel's mc gets cucked by his girlfriend them gets cucked afterwards by his next nurse girlfriend along with it being super nationalist racist and deleting any negative reviews it's a ****ty novel way to go qidian for bringing in this trash no one likes except for some cucks

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aaabb_aabb
aaabb_aabbLv2

Reveal spoiler

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TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

This novel really helps me get my daily review in. This is the 5th time the translator has mass deleted negative reviews. It’s shameful, disgusting, immature, and manipulative.

4yr
shelwyn
shelwynLv15

Wow 20 negative reviews got deleted upon release. The story is a drug, cheating, and rape story so have at it. MC gets cheated on hard, his girl gets addicted to drugs and fucks other guys. If that's what you are into then this is it cheif. NTR at it's stomache churning best.

4yr
Dosithee
DositheeLv5

No thanks bro. Don't know why crap like this hogs the top spots while gold like Way of the devil, Herding gods, Nightmare's Call, Nano Machine, etc. which are 10x better are way lower.

4yr
Tuuu_Uut
Tuuu_UutLv3

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4yr
Darkshadow12
Darkshadow12Lv4

Bastard deletes all the negative reviews!!!! This novel doesn't have anything other than negatives!!!! Utter trash that should be avoided at all cost!!!! Reviews are being deleted!! Trashy novel that got a rating of less than 2 is selected for voting but a gem of rating 4.6 is abandoned without even a chance for voting. F*ck this trial read system! Only gets our hopes high just to crush it without any reasoning!!!! This is my 5th review!!!!! Previous 4 reviews were deleted! Fu*k you coward translator!

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