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LOPOSdLv105yr
2020-04-30 10:41

I'm a big fan of I Have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World, I Found A Planet and Scholar’s Advanced Technological System. So I was quite excited to read this novel because I thought it would be in the same vein. As the story progress, I realize this story is absolute crap. The translation is excellent and the English flows smoothly but they couldn't save the abysmal quality of the plot and character designs. The mc is endowed with a system from a parallel universe with technology hundred thousand years more advanced than Earth and yet the mc decides the best use of the system is to be a street thug, a gamer and then a bodyguard - it was at that moment I decided to drop it. The story is not worth reading. There are much better novels out there, especially the ones I listed at the beginning of the post.

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Silver_Devil_Panda
Silver_Devil_PandaLv13

My opinion is even if it’s way advance he still limited by how to get reactions in a constant way. I’m can’t think of many others but I say he made the best of it. He wasn’t a street thug he saved a girl from a child slave ring and those thugs came to him he used the system to save himself. With that accident he was then offered a job being a bodyguard, and while he was being a bodyguard to observe the person he needs to protect he plays games which started to hit it off but he never become a Pro gamer with live-streaming platform. Am I saying it’s original, unpredictable and totally cultivating? No but is it fun to read yeah it is. My anguish with the novel is that the MC doesn’t actively try to get more reactions out of people and sometimes it doesn’t feel like they count some reactions and sometimes they just give stupidly high reaction points. Also even later on as of “180” the MC vibe might read thug, killer, psycho. I feel it’s pretty founded. As the leader he takes actions in what he believes is max efficiency and does things to the best of his abilities.

Cawcaw
CawcawLv4

Regret?

Silver_Devil_Panda:My opinion is even if it’s way advance he still limited by how to get reactions in a constant way. I’m can’t think of many others but I say he made the best of it. He wasn’t a street thug he saved a girl from a child slave ring and those thugs came to him he used the system to save himself. With that accident he was then offered a job being a bodyguard, and while he was being a bodyguard to observe the person he needs to protect he plays games which started to hit it off but he never become a Pro gamer with live-streaming platform. Am I saying it’s original, unpredictable and totally cultivating? No but is it fun to read yeah it is. My anguish with the novel is that the MC doesn’t actively try to get more reactions out of people and sometimes it doesn’t feel like they count some reactions and sometimes they just give stupidly high reaction points. Also even later on as of “180” the MC vibe might read thug, killer, psycho. I feel it’s pretty founded. As the leader he takes actions in what he believes is max efficiency and does things to the best of his abilities.
DragoPackMan
DragoPackManLv4

Wat about NTR in chapter 220

Silver_Devil_Panda:My opinion is even if it’s way advance he still limited by how to get reactions in a constant way. I’m can’t think of many others but I say he made the best of it. He wasn’t a street thug he saved a girl from a child slave ring and those thugs came to him he used the system to save himself. With that accident he was then offered a job being a bodyguard, and while he was being a bodyguard to observe the person he needs to protect he plays games which started to hit it off but he never become a Pro gamer with live-streaming platform. Am I saying it’s original, unpredictable and totally cultivating? No but is it fun to read yeah it is. My anguish with the novel is that the MC doesn’t actively try to get more reactions out of people and sometimes it doesn’t feel like they count some reactions and sometimes they just give stupidly high reaction points. Also even later on as of “180” the MC vibe might read thug, killer, psycho. I feel it’s pretty founded. As the leader he takes actions in what he believes is max efficiency and does things to the best of his abilities.
zouave
zouaveLv11

I am gonna try reading the 2nd and 3rd novel you listed. I hope it doesn't degenrate into racist novel mid to late game.

Mumbajumba
MumbajumbaLv5

ı found a planet is nationalist as Fuck

zouave:I am gonna try reading the 2nd and 3rd novel you listed. I hope it doesn't degenrate into racist novel mid to late game.
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