Heya! So here's what I have to say: Writing Quality 4/5 - It was really good with very, very few mistakes, however the narrative and descriptions could use a bit polishing. I'm not saying I'm the best at vivid writing, but I can see some unpolished parts (maybe because you're mass releasing chapters?) Stability of Updates 5/5 - A very endearing part of any novel, although sacrificing quality over quantity is not very good. Just balance yourself and have some rest once in a while. Story Development 5/5 - I like the direction of the story. Mamy things catch me off guard, and it's a very nice take on the isekai genre. Character Design 5/5 - Kenji is a solid character. I can see how his thoughts and choices relate to his personality. World Background 4/5 - I'm still at around chapter 4, hopefully finishing the rest after, yet I can say that the world is kinda good with all that weird naked woman and her kin being so mysterious. But after that, all I can see are the generic goblins and demons, although I think the later chapters might add some new elements into the mix. Overall, I can see you reaching the top with Hero Scout. I mean, seeing all these bad stories up on top really gets on me, and why stories like yours are still at rock bottom. Hopefully that'll change, so let's pass the barrier together yeah?
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