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This review was written for a review swap, so if that's a factor to the reader, please consider it. If we remove nature from nurture, are the memories that are left still capable of influencing us? That's what I'm left wondering after reading Hero Scout. It's a commendable effort, at times confusing, but that doesn't necessarily detract from the earnest charm of its main character. I found it readable, functionally similar to Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken (I'd be surprised if it wasn't inspired by it), and actually a thousand times more legible than that light novel, but I digress. Can we accept the memories of others and, if that doesn't debilitate us, can we even decode them? Are they like dreams, or visions, or just raw feelings? I'll come back to this in a moment. Hero Scout, apart from its rather original scheme, is very par for the course in specific plot points. There's a goddess who's snarky! A hero/antihero who's... also snarky! He both doesn't and does have a spine, which sort of fits with his being an amorphous slime, I suppose. There are villains who crumble from a single face slap, overpowered abilities passed off as weaknesses, and classic isekai hijinks, which I will say I enjoy. I like those things. But among all of the chaff, all of the distractions, is singular--almost throwaway--minutiae to the hero's slime-like powers. Not merely the ability to take something's form, but to apparently take all their memories in the bargain! It catches me, not because I worry about plot holes and contrivances, but because the hero doesn't seem bothered by this at all. So, who are we? As people, I mean. There's a great debate between nature vs nurture, how much of our character is endowed in us by our parents, and how much of it we learn from our experiences. Even if you separate the nature, the nurture can be extraordinarily powerful. Personally, I can speak to instances of nurture, like reading a very compelling story, having shattered me emotionally. What we experience, and how it touches us, can have profound effects on who we are. And Kenji is able to, suddenly, consume that in a very direct way. I imagine it's not quite like watching a movie, it must be much more instantaneous--confusing--and strange. Would any of us really be able to process memories in the way their original bearer held them? And if we couldn't, what would they look like? An abstract painting? An emotionless dance? If we could, understand those memories, I find it highly unlikely that Kenji wouldn't feel a terrible impact. That nurture colliding with his own weasely nature. For example, the experiences that made a knight into a hero? He doesn't seem to really reflect on them as he uses the knight's skills for tricks. Part of that might be his character, part of that might be the slapstick comedy, but I feel like it taps a serious--very interesting--complication without due pause. I think Hero Scout is very interesting, derivative in some respects, but original where it counts. It has good ideas at its core, though a little flippant with the real philosophy. I enjoyed it despite the miss steps and came out of it wondering where the author will take it. Is this a 'kenji sucks up all the hero candidates memories and becomes a super hero' story? I don't know, too early to say. I do think the author has interesting choices and a fairly open-ended plot. If those kernels of good ideas could be elevated, then this could really be something great.

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Hello Zeno Writer, Your review has gotten my heart racing! I never thought I would be able to write something that would elicit such an extensive, thorough and philosophical review! You've hit the nail on the head here with the lack of depth in Kenji's reactions. I won't go into in-world detail, but the demanding pace of publishing two chapters a day has reduced the amount of time I would have preferred to expand upon that part of the narrative. It is my intention that when I get free time from my day job I will be thoroughly reviewing the current chapters, and fleshing out some scenes. Otherwise, thank you again! I hope you will continue to read as I publish further chapters, and join me in this journey to find out where Kenji will be going :)

ZenoWriter
ZenoWriterLv2ZenoWriter

Aha, you're embarrassing me. I think our review system is suitable for pedestrians, but authors must understand there's more to our art than 'it's good' or 'it's bad.' Two chapters a day is a very tough schedule, and on top of a day job! Writing is my only job, and I can barely keep to one chapter a day, so you have a lot of esteem in my eyes. I'll certainly check in again and keep an eye on your progress. If you ever need anything, such as feedback, advice, or an ata-boy for doing hard work, don't hesitate to ping me. Writing can be maddening, it can be confusing and upsetting, and the resources of experienced authors and editors aren't available to most of us. Those of us that care about writing as art, as opposed to tired labor, should stick together.

Willsimulated:Hello Zeno Writer, Your review has gotten my heart racing! I never thought I would be able to write something that would elicit such an extensive, thorough and philosophical review! You've hit the nail on the head here with the lack of depth in Kenji's reactions. I won't go into in-world detail, but the demanding pace of publishing two chapters a day has reduced the amount of time I would have preferred to expand upon that part of the narrative. It is my intention that when I get free time from my day job I will be thoroughly reviewing the current chapters, and fleshing out some scenes. Otherwise, thank you again! I hope you will continue to read as I publish further chapters, and join me in this journey to find out where Kenji will be going :)
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WillsimulatedAuthorWillsimulated

Thank you Master Zenowriter! To be regarded by one with such ability as yours is truly an honour - currently, I am going to trial slowing down the pace and 'smelling the roses' so to speak. Add some more thought, the reaction from the characters and non-plot driven sentences if that makes sense. I'll be saving the originals, so if it doesn't work out I'll always be able to revert haha

ZenoWriter:Aha, you're embarrassing me. I think our review system is suitable for pedestrians, but authors must understand there's more to our art than 'it's good' or 'it's bad.' Two chapters a day is a very tough schedule, and on top of a day job! Writing is my only job, and I can barely keep to one chapter a day, so you have a lot of esteem in my eyes. I'll certainly check in again and keep an eye on your progress. If you ever need anything, such as feedback, advice, or an ata-boy for doing hard work, don't hesitate to ping me. Writing can be maddening, it can be confusing and upsetting, and the resources of experienced authors and editors aren't available to most of us. Those of us that care about writing as art, as opposed to tired labor, should stick together.
ZenoWriter
ZenoWriterLv2ZenoWriter

I look forward to your results.

Willsimulated:Thank you Master Zenowriter! To be regarded by one with such ability as yours is truly an honour - currently, I am going to trial slowing down the pace and 'smelling the roses' so to speak. Add some more thought, the reaction from the characters and non-plot driven sentences if that makes sense. I'll be saving the originals, so if it doesn't work out I'll always be able to revert haha