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TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv64yr
2020-05-30 08:36

OK the story started with great quality but chapter by chapter the quality decrease from 44 upward its just plain and awful to read novels needs to stop the going to school cliche is killing most of them I don't even understand y he should go to school coz all the skills and beads are in the dimensions no offense I find the whole school premises dull. The author had a good Idea maybe it will b better but I doubt it I mean who in their right mind will remain in the same grade for 3years straight. That plot armor is all over the place infact I don't even understand what's going on. Verdict read this if u only have nothing better to do and the author is a huge nationalists.

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Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

Finally someone else who understands how tiring and annoying the stupid school arcs are. It makes no sense for a grown man to be reincarnated and still choose to go to school when it's clearly not necessary because they are either op or can get rich easily. Imagine calling yourself a "Immortal GodKing" and then letting a teacher scold and punish you.

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Shadowdracul
ShadowdraculLv5

In short the story is about a 25 year old gets transmigrated to a world with monster, killing whom grants you skills. Has a big sister who needs him in his team so he has to become stronger fast which seems to be the short term Boss fight. The story isn’t all vanilla, Some dark sides of human character is already shown. Overall with a humorous MC and nice side characters the book looks great. Details: World background: Earth has opened portals to various planes which are filled with monsters. Humanity evolved by killing this monsters and taking their skills. Mc: The trucksan was on holiday so the transmigration Of MC was done by slapkun. Mc is a 25 year old in a 15 year old’s body. He is quite likeable. Isn’t a psychopath, So killing monsters did affect him at the start. So far he is quite calm about things, and uses his brain. Though because he is new to the world most of his training path is decided by his sister. Cheat: At the starting base his powers are both good and bad for him, He only has 9 skill slots while even the most average people have 15-17 slots. But the cheat allows him to save 2 skills in 1 slot and they are able to be upgraded. But his body is too weak so his cultivation speed is very slow compared to how much his upgraded skills cost. Side characters: Currently the two most focused side characters are MC’s sister her best friend Both of whom are strong high schoolers. Their relationship is quite smooth for now. The Mc also got to know some schoolmates not sure if they will continue to be there in the story. So far it looks like if the Author introduces a named character he doesn’t just let them go after a chapter, But keeps using them so its not a waste to remember their names.

OpinionatedPotato
OpinionatedPotatoLv4

Poorly executed plot. Translator leaves much of the chinese language as is without providing explanations to the inside jokes or references that the author makes. This is nothing shot of pure laziness. There's a few specific chapters that involve a cell phone and some texting app, the only problem is that as the reader we have absolutely no clue what's going on. No translator notes, no editor notes, nothing. 5 Chapters of the 34 that I read are completely incomprehensible in relation to the plot because this translator is lazy. Besides that, I did mention that the plot was poorly executed. What I mean by that is that there's little to no segway into the actions the main character makes. Often times the author skips over explanations of situations or such explanations aren't translated well enough for the reader to understand what's happening. This ties into the translator being lazy. Concept wise, it's very interesting. I've read about similar concepts in other novels, but it's original enough to still feel fresh considering the overall bland nature of this genre. This is of course hampered by the lack of explanations from the author or the poorly translated explanations from the lazy translator. Much of the novel is lost in translation. Much of the novel is marketed towards people in China/Korea, it's not really meant for English audiences, I wouldn't be surprised if such people would have difficulty in relating to situations described in the novel. The author is very bad at writing fighting scenes. A lot of the background in such scenes is bland and lackluster with lack of detail. The combat is also poorly described. Overall, a lot is lacking with this novel.

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