Review Detail of amaturewriter in Naruto: Ultimate Weapon

The stories concept is dope but the actual story is BS....like the MC beats up an anbu...in fucking kakashi's team and yet the hokage is like.."we need to watch the kid"..bull****..The MC has a DF thats interpreted as a bloodline buy the kage and they dont do jackshit about it...I mean writer could've made up something but no....also whats up with anko's personality? I am not against it but the hell man? No suspicions when some kid knows about your cursed seal...Look point is... the writer has a great idea but the story and character development are almost non-existent