Naruto: Ultimate Weapon

The stories concept is dope but the actual story is BS....like the MC beats up an anbu...in fucking kakashi's team and yet the hokage is like.."we need to watch the kid"..bull****..The MC has a DF thats interpreted as a bloodline buy the kage and they dont do jackshit about it...I mean writer could've made up something but no....also whats up with anko's personality? I am not against it but the hell man? No suspicions when some kid knows about your cursed seal...Look point is... the writer has a great idea but the story and character development are almost non-existent

Bah MC stupid and excessive arrogant --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Stupid characters stupid mc and stupid wishes ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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The premise of the story is good but the mc is not the sharpest tool in the shed , there are many times were the mc should have been taken out to interrogation, also the relationship with anko feels a little bit unnatural with her being 22 and him 8 I think the author shoukd have waited for the timeskip atleast

this is a great novel keep up the great work...........................................................................................................................................................................................

I think it is great I think the way you added all the different stories together was great and his powers aren't the usual ones. zzzzzzzzzzzzzz