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Precheur
PrecheurLv55yr
2020-02-29 23:42

I'm gnna say it here cause feel like author won't see it otherwise. MC has gamer mind, he can't fall in madness with his power. So a few chapters make no sens.

GAMER IN THE MULTIVERSE

pARTYaNIMAL
4.8
47 Chs

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pARTYaNIMAL
pARTYaNIMALAuthor

I do read every comment, and the reason madness affected him was because he naturally allowed to do so to exploit the power.

5yr
Precheur
PrecheurLv5

then why does the return of memory of clone affect him ?

pARTYaNIMAL:I do read every comment, and the reason madness affected him was because he naturally allowed to do so to exploit the power.
5yr
pARTYaNIMAL
pARTYaNIMALAuthor

Gamer mind block mind effects not headaches, even the gamer in the gamer gets those went a massive in take on information gets to him. I think chapter 155

Precheur:then why does the return of memory of clone affect him ?
5yr
pARTYaNIMAL
pARTYaNIMALAuthor

But I respect your opinion.

5yr
pARTYaNIMAL
pARTYaNIMALAuthor

And it doesn’t affect him perse, it’s just like a migraine, for a bit it no a metal status. Also I hope you change your review in the future, when you feel like I improved whatever you feel you don’t like.

Precheur:then why does the return of memory of clone affect him ?
5yr
Precheur
PrecheurLv5

well i feel like one piece was a bad choice since it makes this story slice of liFe now so i won't as long as it goes this way. Maybe would it be better to go bleach directly since he would be around people stronger an get better.

pARTYaNIMAL:And it doesn’t affect him perse, it’s just like a migraine, for a bit it no a metal status. Also I hope you change your review in the future, when you feel like I improved whatever you feel you don’t like.
5yr
pARTYaNIMAL
pARTYaNIMALAuthor

The One piece arc has like 2-3 episodes more there is no real challenge for him there anyways.

Precheur:well i feel like one piece was a bad choice since it makes this story slice of liFe now so i won't as long as it goes this way. Maybe would it be better to go bleach directly since he would be around people stronger an get better.
5yr
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