Item: GAMER IN THE MULTIVERSE
Rating: 5
Author: Will_Caruso

Will_CarusoLv45yr

2020-02-28 10:12

A Cool story so far with good mc. Just don't soften up the mc just to appease some pussy idiots. The mc has trust issues and such thing as 'morals' shouldn't stop him putting seals and other precautions. After all, you wrote his past background like this. I hate it when writers write mc backstory as some tough badass mother fu*ker but then he acts like a bi*ch and restricts himself and allows everyone walks over him because apparently he is 'CHANGED' LOL!

GAMER IN THE MULTIVERSE

pARTYaNIMAL

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Liked by 1 people

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RichBoyWinstonLv3

Dude you post like the EXACT same review in fics with MCs with bad pasts. I don't really care about you liking ruthless MCs and all but at least change like three words or something .-.

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RichBoyWinstonLv3

and worse of it all the MC doesn't even have a"tough badass" backstory...

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