Review Detail of Heavenly_Devil in The Legend of the Kyubi

The story is great, to the point of trying to use my imperfect Spanish to try and read ahead... Anways, the characters are well designed, border line great. The world background is great, it has a few variations from the original, and I love that. The story development is even better, I cant tell where it'll go sometimes, and that's coming from someone that expects almost everything, thus calling it cliche... well, that IS what cliche means. Anyways, although the grammar isn't perfect, it's understandable. Love it, but a review is a review. SO, I'm not rating it a perfect 5 stars...