Review Detail of Nagisa_Chwan in The Days When I’m With You
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So, I liked the idea of the story. And I believe it’s gonna be one of my good reads here. However, I experienced some things. The grammatical errors sometimes made the text confusing. The back and forth in the first twelve chapters also made my head spin. Other than that I like the plot and I like the characters, especially our main youth Lian Ge (? Sorry, I’m still struggling to remember the names). He’s such an adorable and loveable character. And I can’t wait to read on and discover more about these people. Keep on writing. It’s a beautiful story.
The Days When I’m With You
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Hello Nagisa! 😁 Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. It’s true it can get confusing and I’m quite surprised after 12 chapters you are still confused because I see quite a lot of my readers understand it after the 12 chapters. That’s why I stated it that way in the author’s notes. But now you raise the issue, I will try to look into it again and try my best to edit it so the story can run more smoothly. Once again thank you for telling me this, love! ❤️ I hope you would still continue to read because as the story progresses, more details will be unravelled so everything will become clearer and clearer. And this story still has a lot more to offer with all the romance and the actions 😁
Hello Nagisa! 😁 Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. It’s true it can get confusing and I’m quite surprised after 12 chapters you are still confused because I see quite a lot of my readers understand it after the 12 chapters. That’s why I stated it that way in the author’s notes. But now you raise the issue, I will try to look into it again and try my best to edit it so the story can run more smoothly. Once again thank you for telling me this, love! ❤️ I hope you would still continue to read because as the story progresses, more details will be unravelled so everything will become clearer and clearer. And this story still has a lot more to offer with all the romance and the actions 😁