Great story but I can’t get busy and not stay on the same consistent update schedule. I’ll try my best to fix that. Feel free to get any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism where you see fit. You can get mii your stones if you want but this is still purely for fun entertainment purposes.
Rayketsuu
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LIKEJake_Lewis_3474:Unless your name is Orson Scott Card, you have no right to use the name "Ender". How's that for constructive criticism?