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2020-10-12 16:44

In fanfics the more chapters it has the trashier it gets. 800 chapters in and all i can say is that this novel deserves to be burned in hell. Only an idiot will continue reading this hoping it will get better but it wont get better im sure of it.

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TheFallen99
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HELLO, PLEASE READ THIS IF YOU WISH TO AVOID RIPPING YOUR HAIR OUT IN FRUSTRATION AS THIS STORY SLOWLY TURNS FROM ONE OF YOUR FAVOURITES INTO UTTER SHITE. It may start out strong, but it gets progressively worse as soon as the mc gets to the Harry Potter universe WARNING: this is not a Witcher story - overall, the witcher world has a relatively minor presence and the emphasis is on characters from a variety of different, yet incompatible worlds being brought to it, which makes power levels vary in unpredictable and painful manners and turns the plot slowly more and more retarded as a godlike mc struggles against mortals and their plots due to his own passive, cuckold nature, lack of foresight and weakness of mind and character. Regardless, here we fucking go... This story started out so well, yet it turned out to be an utter disappointment in the later stages. The mc starts out in the witcher world, before leaving it to briefly travel to the absolver universe, before choosing to got to dark souls... and staying there for a few hundred chapters. Regardless of the extremely long time spent in dark souls, and the fact that the mc spends his time in somewhat typical dark souls fashion fighting through hordes of enemies and a boss every chapter for roughly 300 chapters, the interactions between characters are beyond excellent and keep the otherwise bland plot interesting. However, it all goes to shit as soon as the mc leaves dark souls to travel to a random world, which turns out to be Harry Potter, where - plot twist! - he finds Cirilla, who's accidentally murdered Sirius Black and ****ed up the timeline - sounds interesting? Well it isn't. The story begins to unravel completely from here on out. The mc becomes a simp for Ciri, giving her anything she wants for free whenever she demands it of him, while guilt tripping her into staying with him while he "fixes" everything. He also has a three way with Fleur and Ciri, before they ditch her to go to their universe again, while leaving her a conspicuously easy way to contact them. She doesn't, and they don't give a ****. You may say "every story has its weak points" and keep reading in the hopes of it getting back on track - don't. When they return to the witcher, they **** up a Nilfgaardian fleet and get ready to face the Wild Hunt by summoning everyone Reima has befriended and saving them from their slowly imploding worlds, namely Absolver and Dark Souls. They win, but the Wild Hunt isn't completely eradicated, then the heroes found a city. MC travels to Undertale, for some fucking reason, getting the monsters from that world to join him after saving them, before saving some people from Harry Potter - apparently he caused the apocalypse in that world as the muggle nuked themselves and the magical in the hopes of killing them all (somehow? The muggle nuked THEMSELVES to EXTINCTION to kill the wizards among them... What. The. Fuck?) Anyway, turns out the MC got cucked by Bill Weasley, who's Fleur's new beau. For some reason. And the mc's like "oh, that's cool", before he fucks off elsewhere. Some more contrived retarded plot where the mc, who by now has God-level powers, struggles against totally inadequate threats before sometimes letting them be, before another character from Dark Souls, who's been vying for the mc's attention and love for this whole time while being blatantly and consciously ignored in favor of this bratty, bitch, gold digging characterisation of Ciri, suddenly does a 180, becomes a psycho stalker, drugs her and rapes her via love potions so that Ciri would help her get with the mc. Sounds ****ed up? It gets worse! When the mc discovers the whole plot and Ciri is freed forom the potion's control, she goes "oh, that was cool" and the mc, who just got cucked a second time with a different woman, who's also clearly fine with cheating on him, also goes "oh, that was cool". Then the guilty party suffers literally no punishment, and in fact gets her way by becoming Ciri's *** slave, as she keeps cheating on the mc with her former rapist, while the mc is happily getting cucked. I don't know what happens after that because by now my brain's almost melted and pouring out of my fucking ears and I've given up on this dumpster fire of a story. This is a perfect example of a story starting out strong and slowly going to shit as the author tries to mil it for all it's worth. I really regret ever voting in its favour, because it makes you get invested by playing the characters against each other perfectly, before ruining it all as the author doesn't give a ****. Honestly, one of the worst reads on this site for anyone who doesn't enjoy getting cucked and acting like a simp, which I strongly believe is part of the author's everyday interests. Read at your own peril. Good luck

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