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Spike009
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2020-05-28 10:17

I’ll be honest novel began with a bang . But like most novel quality keep dropping until it becomes annoying in Harry Potter. 400 + chapters he doesn’t have single girl. Ciri is a lesbian who tries to get mc woman all the time ,also he is a fucking pussy. I really don’t know how this novel has a higher rank

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Is it so bad? I want to read it, but looking on reviews and chapter name, don't give me a good vibes. It's seems like comedy with weird Japanese nice guy for a mc, and I really don't like it..... The worst problem, beside world's complaining, no one try to say something about characters and they mental growth...

Spike009
Spike009Lv4

1. The lesbian stuff gets on my nerves . Ciri is a lesbian . She is kind of 2 main character. 2. Before reading this story I thought it will be mainly 'witcher' world, with some other worlds visited to get stronger and so on. What I did not expect is out 300 chapters nearly half of it is pure dark souls!! Also when mc visit Harry Potter world he becomes so righteous like some idiot and wants to save the world because Ciri killed serious black! Bro why the heck do you CARE its not your world, not your responsibility, I find it boring and stupid. Worst of all he tries guilt-baiting Ciri as if she's responsible for Harry potters world and Voldemort future return. Like wtf lol. 3. 400 chapter not a confirmed romance so if you ask my opinion this novel is hit I dropped it long time ago. But opinions differ you can try it out . But you will drop it for sure once dark soul starts. If you some how make it through that Harry Potter world is where you will be irritated and write review like me to went off your anger.

Yuri_is_Ntr:Is it so bad? I want to read it, but looking on reviews and chapter name, don't give me a good vibes. It's seems like comedy with weird Japanese nice guy for a mc, and I really don't like it..... The worst problem, beside world's complaining, no one try to say something about characters and they mental growth...
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

Ugh, I see, I'm not in mood to get my nerves tested, so yeah.... But still thanks a lot. Seems like you really saved me from nasty stuff,ans pure rage...

Spike009:1. The lesbian stuff gets on my nerves . Ciri is a lesbian . She is kind of 2 main character. 2. Before reading this story I thought it will be mainly 'witcher' world, with some other worlds visited to get stronger and so on. What I did not expect is out 300 chapters nearly half of it is pure dark souls!! Also when mc visit Harry Potter world he becomes so righteous like some idiot and wants to save the world because Ciri killed serious black! Bro why the heck do you CARE its not your world, not your responsibility, I find it boring and stupid. Worst of all he tries guilt-baiting Ciri as if she's responsible for Harry potters world and Voldemort future return. Like wtf lol. 3. 400 chapter not a confirmed romance so if you ask my opinion this novel is hit I dropped it long time ago. But opinions differ you can try it out . But you will drop it for sure once dark soul starts. If you some how make it through that Harry Potter world is where you will be irritated and write review like me to went off your anger.
Spike009
Spike009Lv4

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EnderPL
EnderPLLv6

Same here. Thanks! I don’t mind the story but it’s nice to have romance or harem sometimes. Without romance the story is dry. Thanks again.

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TheFallen99
TheFallen99Lv4

HELLO, PLEASE READ THIS IF YOU WISH TO AVOID RIPPING YOUR HAIR OUT IN FRUSTRATION AS THIS STORY SLOWLY TURNS FROM ONE OF YOUR FAVOURITES INTO UTTER SHITE. It may start out strong, but it gets progressively worse as soon as the mc gets to the Harry Potter universe WARNING: this is not a Witcher story - overall, the witcher world has a relatively minor presence and the emphasis is on characters from a variety of different, yet incompatible worlds being brought to it, which makes power levels vary in unpredictable and painful manners and turns the plot slowly more and more retarded as a godlike mc struggles against mortals and their plots due to his own passive, cuckold nature, lack of foresight and weakness of mind and character. Regardless, here we fucking go... This story started out so well, yet it turned out to be an utter disappointment in the later stages. The mc starts out in the witcher world, before leaving it to briefly travel to the absolver universe, before choosing to got to dark souls... and staying there for a few hundred chapters. Regardless of the extremely long time spent in dark souls, and the fact that the mc spends his time in somewhat typical dark souls fashion fighting through hordes of enemies and a boss every chapter for roughly 300 chapters, the interactions between characters are beyond excellent and keep the otherwise bland plot interesting. However, it all goes to shit as soon as the mc leaves dark souls to travel to a random world, which turns out to be Harry Potter, where - plot twist! - he finds Cirilla, who's accidentally murdered Sirius Black and ****ed up the timeline - sounds interesting? Well it isn't. The story begins to unravel completely from here on out. The mc becomes a simp for Ciri, giving her anything she wants for free whenever she demands it of him, while guilt tripping her into staying with him while he "fixes" everything. He also has a three way with Fleur and Ciri, before they ditch her to go to their universe again, while leaving her a conspicuously easy way to contact them. She doesn't, and they don't give a ****. You may say "every story has its weak points" and keep reading in the hopes of it getting back on track - don't. When they return to the witcher, they **** up a Nilfgaardian fleet and get ready to face the Wild Hunt by summoning everyone Reima has befriended and saving them from their slowly imploding worlds, namely Absolver and Dark Souls. They win, but the Wild Hunt isn't completely eradicated, then the heroes found a city. MC travels to Undertale, for some fucking reason, getting the monsters from that world to join him after saving them, before saving some people from Harry Potter - apparently he caused the apocalypse in that world as the muggle nuked themselves and the magical in the hopes of killing them all (somehow? The muggle nuked THEMSELVES to EXTINCTION to kill the wizards among them... What. The. Fuck?) Anyway, turns out the MC got cucked by Bill Weasley, who's Fleur's new beau. For some reason. And the mc's like "oh, that's cool", before he fucks off elsewhere. Some more contrived retarded plot where the mc, who by now has God-level powers, struggles against totally inadequate threats before sometimes letting them be, before another character from Dark Souls, who's been vying for the mc's attention and love for this whole time while being blatantly and consciously ignored in favor of this bratty, bitch, gold digging characterisation of Ciri, suddenly does a 180, becomes a psycho stalker, drugs her and rapes her via love potions so that Ciri would help her get with the mc. Sounds ****ed up? It gets worse! When the mc discovers the whole plot and Ciri is freed forom the potion's control, she goes "oh, that was cool" and the mc, who just got cucked a second time with a different woman, who's also clearly fine with cheating on him, also goes "oh, that was cool". Then the guilty party suffers literally no punishment, and in fact gets her way by becoming Ciri's *** slave, as she keeps cheating on the mc with her former rapist, while the mc is happily getting cucked. I don't know what happens after that because by now my brain's almost melted and pouring out of my fucking ears and I've given up on this dumpster fire of a story. This is a perfect example of a story starting out strong and slowly going to shit as the author tries to mil it for all it's worth. I really regret ever voting in its favour, because it makes you get invested by playing the characters against each other perfectly, before ruining it all as the author doesn't give a ****. Honestly, one of the worst reads on this site for anyone who doesn't enjoy getting cucked and acting like a simp, which I strongly believe is part of the author's everyday interests. Read at your own peril. Good luck

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