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Daoist322929
Daoist322929Lv45yr
2020-01-08 01:26

This is really great. The story isn't that far now so it's pretty weird to write a review now. That doesn't matter i will just update this once the story progresses. This story has no cold friendless mc who have no fun in life except for anime, no 'hello i am god you died and lets turn you in a cheat'. The story starts of realistic. The mc does things humans will do when they are in these unknown circumstances and don't understand how they ended up in them. Humans will seek thing they do understand for comfort. Like the mc when he found some humans. Although normally i don't like mc's who seek humans when they know they aren't human anymore. But this could work out. I just really hope the author will make his human form a little girl(with no way to change). It would be really funny. Maybe make it so he gets adopted and lives with the family a while after getting human form. Get him to academy to find a way to earth it would be really funny to see him deal with arrogant young masters with crushes wanting to marry him.

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Redwinter
RedwinterAuthor

Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!

Daoist322929
Daoist322929Lv4

Awh that's to bad. Then get him an elf companion or some random princes knight who want's to slay the evil dragon. Make it that everything get's exremely awkward with elf really clumsy. Or use hero summoning to do idk. It would really interresting if add hero summoning.

Redwinter:Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!
DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

harem?(hope so) or any romance? Also if you won't give him a human form how about a humanoid form(like a lizard-man look but dragon-like(meaning a form where he shrinks to the size or around the size of a human but can stand on two legs(even if said legs don't look human-like) and his front legs turn into arms and hands with a humanoid torso, dragon head, wing, tail, etc)

Redwinter:Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!
Redwinter
RedwinterAuthor

Sorry to disappoint you, but I'm afraid not. He will grow, but he will never have a human or even humanoid form. Actually, if you want to read a great story where this does happen, read "Reborn: Evolving From Nothing." Great story by a great writer. Love both of his works. As of now, I have a general idea of how this story ends far in the future, filled with little arcs I want to explore. Hopefully I get there someday. Baby steps after all.

DragonkingKyo:harem?(hope so) or any romance? Also if you won't give him a human form how about a humanoid form(like a lizard-man look but dragon-like(meaning a form where he shrinks to the size or around the size of a human but can stand on two legs(even if said legs don't look human-like) and his front legs turn into arms and hands with a humanoid torso, dragon head, wing, tail, etc)
BlackenRose
BlackenRoseLv10

Are you going to make him a female or something along those lines, QUESTION MARK?

Redwinter:Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!
Jagermeister
JagermeisterLv10

Someone else has said this previously but forgoing a humanoid for entirely would probably be best. We come here to see an MC's interactions with other non-humans though the human interaction in this story works quite well, I think I personally have a slight preference to the interactions with other magical beasts, both in and out of combat. I do hope that there's more arcs in the future that focus on just his interactions with other magical beasts because the lack of actual "words" feels natural.

Redwinter:Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!
Redwinter
RedwinterAuthor

Yup, he will not be gaining a human or humanoid form, ever, period. Read too many stories where that happens and all the interesting aspects of being a beast are lost.

Jagermeister:Someone else has said this previously but forgoing a humanoid for entirely would probably be best. We come here to see an MC's interactions with other non-humans though the human interaction in this story works quite well, I think I personally have a slight preference to the interactions with other magical beasts, both in and out of combat. I do hope that there's more arcs in the future that focus on just his interactions with other magical beasts because the lack of actual "words" feels natural.
SerBlueom
SerBlueomLv5

Absolutely hate that type of gender bender nonsense, but to each their own. I actually know of a manga that turns out that way that I would like to recommend called “Mookhyang - Dark Lady”. While I was pretty upset about it the story was still interesting

Daoist322929
Daoist322929Lv4

I just find it funny to see prots life fall apart and seeing them feeling insecure and those stupid awkward conversations. But i don't like when they don't get over it quick. It takes the fun out it. Thanks though

SerBlueom:Absolutely hate that type of gender bender nonsense, but to each their own. I actually know of a manga that turns out that way that I would like to recommend called “Mookhyang - Dark Lady”. While I was pretty upset about it the story was still interesting
holson_Charles
holson_CharlesLv15

read that manga i liked it at first, it suck that i had to drop it because of the gender bending thing..

SerBlueom:Absolutely hate that type of gender bender nonsense, but to each their own. I actually know of a manga that turns out that way that I would like to recommend called “Mookhyang - Dark Lady”. While I was pretty upset about it the story was still interesting
Daku_Doragon
Daku_DoragonLv13

I am so glad, I feel that a lot is missed when they are able to transform too. I can just imagine all the funny awkward moments that will happen.

Redwinter:Yup, he will not be gaining a human or humanoid form, ever, period. Read too many stories where that happens and all the interesting aspects of being a beast are lost.
Cameron_Roberts
Cameron_RobertsLv10

I agree with a completely non human mc too many novel ruin it by making a non human mc human. But the communication is a pain. IMO he should get a form of telepathy eventually

Redwinter:Sorry to disappoint you, but I'm afraid not. He will grow, but he will never have a human or even humanoid form. Actually, if you want to read a great story where this does happen, read "Reborn: Evolving From Nothing." Great story by a great writer. Love both of his works. As of now, I have a general idea of how this story ends far in the future, filled with little arcs I want to explore. Hopefully I get there someday. Baby steps after all.
Cameron_Roberts
Cameron_RobertsLv10

I agree with a completely non human mc too many novel ruin it by making a non human mc human. But the communication is a pain. IMO he should get a form of telepathy eventually

Redwinter:Sorry to disappoint you, but I'm afraid not. He will grow, but he will never have a human or even humanoid form. Actually, if you want to read a great story where this does happen, read "Reborn: Evolving From Nothing." Great story by a great writer. Love both of his works. As of now, I have a general idea of how this story ends far in the future, filled with little arcs I want to explore. Hopefully I get there someday. Baby steps after all.
DRAGON_FYRES
DRAGON_FYRESLv2

I read a staory where the MC is a monster and can only be a human for a small amount of time (Eight or so hours max at later in the story) and it portrays his beast part okay i guess, But it also focused too much on the human aspect of being a beast which kinda ruined it for me so i can see very well where your coming from.

Redwinter:Yup, he will not be gaining a human or humanoid form, ever, period. Read too many stories where that happens and all the interesting aspects of being a beast are lost.
DRAGON_FYRES
DRAGON_FYRESLv2

The gender bend thing made sense though, and it gets REALLY good later

holson_Charles:read that manga i liked it at first, it suck that i had to drop it because of the gender bending thing..
IgrisKun
IgrisKunLv11

No pls no

Daoist322929:Awh that's to bad. Then get him an elf companion or some random princes knight who want's to slay the evil dragon. Make it that everything get's exremely awkward with elf really clumsy. Or use hero summoning to do idk. It would really interresting if add hero summoning.
IgrisKun
IgrisKunLv11

is there any harem or romance(hope not), if there is wouldnt that be wierd since hes a old man at heart and would be a pedo

Redwinter:Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!
Jeta_Rose
Jeta_RoseLv4

I love this book. Despite being left on a cliffhanger, I love it a lot. I dream of new chapters and come back to check every month or so just to see sir Author enjoy a different book (shadow slave). I am to the point that I almost wish that it would go on hiatus indefinitely so Author may understand my unbearable longing for the continuation of my favorite story ( old man dragon), but I realize that I wouldn’t want the Author of the novel I hold so dear to be as sad as I am because of my own selfishness. Thus I am at an impass. The thing I enjoy has been (to an extent) abandoned, and the one who left has done so in order do the thing they enjoy (hopefully). In conclusion I pray find joy in continuing this wonderful book that got me into reading. my best wishes to redwinter and I hope you find immorality from one mortal to another. Peace.

Redwinter:Glad you like it so far. Sorry to say I won't be giving him a human form. I have read many stories where this is the case and I always felt there were a lot of missed opportunities when going this path. Lot's of character development and funny situations can be explored when remaining as a magical beast. Although, there is an interesting plot twist that you have (somewhat) hinted at which I planned on doing 😉. Hopefully this isn't too disappointing for you. Thanks for the review!
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