Review Detail of Ninja_Baiano in DC: The Son Of Cobblepot

Good ideas but not enought development. too much revenge torture ****. Obsessive selfinsertion , where the mc is obssesed with harley queen, when he never ever saw her in the history. Name droping megan in the same school as the mc and she just up and ignores his bullying and his killing spree. He knows orange lanterns when its something he could never known as a common person. Mc got a iq of 200 and still is too stupid to realise his plans make no sense"forces the victim to write a will pasing everything she owns to him, and promptly kills her... as if that letter is worth anything... and hes basicaly the first person they would investigate. Also edgy edgy backstory, with no real need to be. Mc mother got raped instead of beying traumatized he still goes to school. He still lives normaly. He still studies because why tf not? Also somehow he never ever trought about revenge until after he got a power... 200 iq by itself is a superpower... Build a bomb and kill some of those people at least. I an stupid and i would at least killed some of those people. Also how hard is it to kill a dumb *****?