Thanks

Yeah but no quirks. Overhaul is one of my favorite villains but obviously he's been altered a moderate amount

Hey it's the author here, so before you start hating on this story I'll be rewriting a whole lot of the story and just making a better version than the original, at least that's my goal of course its still a fanfic the mc will still be the main focus, Oh and the other characters I'll have to develop them aswell as do proper world building so yeah I've got alot work to do some why dont you join me for the ride or at the very least give the story a try I'm sure you'll probably like it since it won't go all cutesy cutesy like the original or virtue signal I'm simply not like that. Also a shameless 5 star review lol.

And to put it Frank I want to improve further so I can improve others lives a bit more by giving them entertainment or making them a bit happier that's one of my main reason of why I write, and why I do what I do.

Also sorry for the late reply I was doing research for a story project I'm working on that I'll release soon

Anyways all those chapters are garbage anyways, this will get a proper rewrite I'm just hammering some details out for the backstory I'll have to double check the progress I have on this story and update you on it but yeah sorry about that, I just haven't had much of a chance to do anything with it since I was practicing with easier fanfics to do. Such as my gravity falla fic, my fairy tail fic, and star wars ones aswell, the list goes on. But yeah this will be filled with actual chapters when I get around to it

Well yeah ig its mature because I've improved and seek improvement, all pride does or thinking something that's great that isnt does is inhibit growth as a person, a writer, and just makes you come off as pompous.

Because I wasn't planning on revisiting this anyways I'm actually rewriting it rn and will replace all of the useless garbage so yeah, I mean this kind of thing happens when you have close to 40 stories.

As soon as you used and insult back such as saying the person was uneducated or even calling a person a pervert both of which have negative connotations was when you stopped being respectful so at around the very beginning of your series of comments. And yes sighs can be taken as signs of disrespect since they're usually associated with exasperation or disappointment which depending on the situation is very disrespectful anyways it seems someone is trying to paint themself in a positive light

I mean I believe it's against devil law to disobey the head of your clan so he kinda has to. So the mc isnt a beta, and even then you do realize there's a thing called avoiding unnecessary drama

Fine lol

Nope

Happy to hear it

Oh and the killing for no reason I enjoy putting reasons to almost everything so that won't be happening for example let's say a kingdom tried to kill him or something he would eradicate the kingdom to set a precedent making a example of them

Oh I almost never write hero fics it's been two years since i wrote a hero fic because usually they're simply not realistic, I mean everyone's the hero of their story but that aside, the mc won't help others for no reason usually it will be to gain loyalty as mentioned, and its fundamentally a good way to do so the better you treat someone or if you save someone most people with a good moral compass will feel indebted as if they owe you even if they shouldn't. Or if they're an ally, but yeah mc is more of a villain or anti hero like most of my stories tbh

Thank you

Great chapter happy to see you updating again

lol I reply eventually always

Ah that's what you mean yeah basically theres 4 killers running lose, we've got the despair sisters with mc and genocide Jack running about

It's fine enough ig and to be fair I'm always busy I always have things I've got to do, that also includes writing