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Review Detail of JackbladesFF7 in DC: The Son Of Cobblepot

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JackbladesFF7
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I was really enjoying this fan fic until about chapter 20 I think. To start off it wasn’t the best but I enjoyed it a lot but then the story got boring and almost felt like the author gave up. The interactions between the author and MC was random and not written well. I am more upset because this story could have been so much better.

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DC: The Son Of Cobblepot

DamianSegorski

Liked it!

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DamianSegorski
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Yeah I'm not enjoying it much even though everyone told me they enjoy it the negativity really got to me I think I'll delete all chapters before 20 and take a break and write another story for a while

JackbladesFF7
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I didn’t mean to like bring you down or anything just saying I feel like the story was great the first 20

DamianSegorski:Yeah I'm not enjoying it much even though everyone told me they enjoy it the negativity really got to me I think I'll delete all chapters before 20 and take a break and write another story for a while
DamianSegorski
DamianSegorskiAuthorDamianSegorski

Nah man you didn't it was some other people and anything beyond chapter 20 seemed off so ill pick it up with a new state of mind later

JackbladesFF7:I didn’t mean to like bring you down or anything just saying I feel like the story was great the first 20