I was really enjoying this fan fic until about chapter 20 I think. To start off it wasn’t the best but I enjoyed it a lot but then the story got boring and almost felt like the author gave up. The interactions between the author and MC was random and not written well. I am more upset because this story could have been so much better.
DamianSegorski
Liked it!
LIKEI didn’t mean to like bring you down or anything just saying I feel like the story was great the first 20
DamianSegorski:Yeah I'm not enjoying it much even though everyone told me they enjoy it the negativity really got to me I think I'll delete all chapters before 20 and take a break and write another story for a while
Nah man you didn't it was some other people and anything beyond chapter 20 seemed off so ill pick it up with a new state of mind later
JackbladesFF7:I didn’t mean to like bring you down or anything just saying I feel like the story was great the first 20