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2020-07-25 01:15

great fanfic........................................................................................................................................................................................................... ............. . .....

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Before the review I just want to say that I didn't watch or read the original I only know the basics of it cuz I looked it up on wiki so my review will be from perspective of someone who knows almost nothing about series and it's original story. So about the story of your work, I just fell in love with it, it's interesting and engaging although I don't see any bigger goal of our MC as he just kinda wonders here and there exploring the world and well I really like the journey part of the story with him being hunted down and when he finally settled down a bit it makes sense with the story being as enjoyable as the travel part. Another thing is our MC, he is a Faunus so discrimination is a must and I think you really nailed this part down, the racism is there and we feel it through the whole time but our MC is strong and mature enough to just not give a f*ck also the political background with White Fang and all is really well done but I think it was already in original but well at least you didn't f*ck it up by changing it too much and making it more complicated than necessary. But coming but to our MC or his character I just like him he is human(Faunus) and he makes mistakes he has his regrets and sorrows but the best thing is that throughout the story he grows and his character changes in justifiable way and we can understand why he thinks like that. Other characters shown in there are also good and they to feel human and your interactions are well done dialogues feels natural and not forced. The world around is interesting and full of things to explore the places you go to just seem real enough to imagine them well. Ps. Harem is good doesn't feels forced, and I really didn't expect Pyrrha to seriously do that good job with that. And SERIOUSLY BRING THE F*CKING LEMOS WE'VE WAITED LONG ENOUGH!!!! I like that he doesn't break promises but but just...I'm really torn apart by your decisions...and I don't even remember names of those two just let them meet or what idk...

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