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Von_Nebula
Von_NebulaLv134yr
2020-03-05 15:54

Good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good! Good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good!good! Also please donโ€™t drop this.

A second chance in Remnant. (RWBY Fan-Fic) DROPPED!

ShadowlessBlade
4.6
127 Chs

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Alucard777
Alucard777Lv3

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3yr

Nyxarias
NyxariasLv5

Its really not bad at first but then its draggs longer and longer there what now 68 chaps??? and still no start of the Canon so when you want to read it because you see Hey its a RWBY Fan-Fic forgett it. Otherweiss as i sad not bad but when you here to read about RWBY Academy and stuff dont bother wait till the canon starts at dont now chap 200 ??? maybe ???

3yr
lumini
luminiLv4

A delightful read. Lots of world and character development that canon didn't have, a few OC's that don't take away from the source material and a slow build up that not enough fan-fics utilize to build anticipation :)

3yr
Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Ragnase
RagnaseLv4

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soldklad
soldkladLv5

the story plot is good but the character relationships development aren't executed well enough it feels too forced and fast I suggest taking it slow, maybe even make it seem like the people see the mc as being weird for being too friendly too fast cause we know the mc is a reincarnated person and he will know who he wants to get close to although I like the fights and the plot but the relationships just put me off this review is made as only after reading up to chapter 10 so I don't know if there is an improvement for later chapters

3yr
ILoveYouAll
ILoveYouAllLv1

Before the review I just want to say that I didn't watch or read the original I only know the basics of it cuz I looked it up on wiki so my review will be from perspective of someone who knows almost nothing about series and it's original story. So about the story of your work, I just fell in love with it, it's interesting and engaging although I don't see any bigger goal of our MC as he just kinda wonders here and there exploring the world and well I really like the journey part of the story with him being hunted down and when he finally settled down a bit it makes sense with the story being as enjoyable as the travel part. Another thing is our MC, he is a Faunus so discrimination is a must and I think you really nailed this part down, the racism is there and we feel it through the whole time but our MC is strong and mature enough to just not give a f*ck also the political background with White Fang and all is really well done but I think it was already in original but well at least you didn't f*ck it up by changing it too much and making it more complicated than necessary. But coming but to our MC or his character I just like him he is human(Faunus) and he makes mistakes he has his regrets and sorrows but the best thing is that throughout the story he grows and his character changes in justifiable way and we can understand why he thinks like that. Other characters shown in there are also good and they to feel human and your interactions are well done dialogues feels natural and not forced. The world around is interesting and full of things to explore the places you go to just seem real enough to imagine them well. Ps. Harem is good doesn't feels forced, and I really didn't expect Pyrrha to seriously do that good job with that. And SERIOUSLY BRING THE F*CKING LEMOS WE'VE WAITED LONG ENOUGH!!!! I like that he doesn't break promises but but just...I'm really torn apart by your decisions...and I don't even remember names of those two just let them meet or what idk...

3yr
Nafsu_geass28
Nafsu_geass28Lv2

is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?

4yr
LTWYL
LTWYLLv1

i love lolis................................................................................................................................

4yr
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