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2020-03-20 10:34

Mmm contexto bien , el diseño de personaje deja algunas cosas por desear , la historia de desarrolla bien pero hay varios detalles como pyrra siendo novia de el por casi como una tontería y las hermanas dejaste la historia de lado que fue bueno , una vez a la semana sería poco pero somos humanos xD , y la cálida está bien para ser un fanfic

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