Review Detail of CrystalKami in Epic of Caterpillar
Review detail
This series does a phenomenal job of wasting Your time. the author spends pages upon pages of writing Dialogue and descriptions and imagery, yet the plot gets pushed no where. in the 21 chapters i read, i felt like i had read simultaneously 100 and 5 chapters. so much happened but at the same time so little. it feels like the novel goes at breakneck speed but at the same time it goes about as fast as a turtle stuck in marmalade. Overall, its an alright novel. it certainly had some neat ideas, but the writing is a little too all over the place.
Epic of Caterpillar
PancakesWitch
Liked by 2 people
LIKEReplies10
PancakesWitch:usually it is praised because of the long initial chapters, they dos shorten later on. Nonetheless, i dont really care
Oh, right, I almost forgot the thing that I found the most egregious; The Naming. could you have not spent a little bit more time with the names? At least research the language you’re using to write the names? As someone who’s learned japanese for the past few years, the names are pretty bad. “Yukionna” actually made me cringe. It seriously do not understand whats so hard about making names.
there isnt any criticism in anything you said, it is all personal opinions that amount to absolutely nothing, your words and everything is pointless, i am just procrastinating by answering you, i should go back to wriring
CrystalKami:You are more than entitled to not listen to The criticisms I give, i do not mind.
PancakesWitch:there isnt any criticism in anything you said, it is all personal opinions that amount to absolutely nothing, your words and everything is pointless, i am just procrastinating by answering you, i should go back to wriring
Reviews are people's thoughts and opinions on your book and they have no obligation to be neutral. Not to mention that the book is touching on an issue that has been ongoing for quite a while. And to be honest in the department of writing about something and nothing at a time you have exceeded even some of the Chinese novels. And while you have no obligation to listen to opinions of others invalidating your points without backing them up and being passive aggressive does not reflect well on your person. And while the above mentioned problem would normally be not an issue, because after all that just means there is more to read, but when you have to pay for chapters it becomes quite a problem. And while I can understand you wanting to earn money for your hard work, after all writing a book takes a lot of effort, more than most can imagine, that doesn't justify making chapters that could be wholly skipped and getting money for it, after all you don't sell people ham and cheese sandwich with less than half a slice of both and stuffing the rest full of lettuce, while it still technically is a ham and cheese sandwich it does leave you somewhat full it is not exactly what it was advertised as it it?
PancakesWitch:there isnt any criticism in anything you said, it is all personal opinions that amount to absolutely nothing, your words and everything is pointless, i am just procrastinating by answering you, i should go back to wriring
Asteria_Azizella:Reviews are people's thoughts and opinions on your book and they have no obligation to be neutral. Not to mention that the book is touching on an issue that has been ongoing for quite a while. And to be honest in the department of writing about something and nothing at a time you have exceeded even some of the Chinese novels. And while you have no obligation to listen to opinions of others invalidating your points without backing them up and being passive aggressive does not reflect well on your person. And while the above mentioned problem would normally be not an issue, because after all that just means there is more to read, but when you have to pay for chapters it becomes quite a problem. And while I can understand you wanting to earn money for your hard work, after all writing a book takes a lot of effort, more than most can imagine, that doesn't justify making chapters that could be wholly skipped and getting money for it, after all you don't sell people ham and cheese sandwich with less than half a slice of both and stuffing the rest full of lettuce, while it still technically is a ham and cheese sandwich it does leave you somewhat full it is not exactly what it was advertised as it it?
antagonizing and degrading your readers doesn't do anyone any good especially when they are only mentioning things, not demanding you to do what they tell you to do
PancakesWitch:your response also got deleted because you used banned words, sussy bakaimage
A very adult approach... But please do mention what inappropriate words I used so that I don't use them again.
PancakesWitch:your response also got deleted because you used banned words, sussy bakaimage