CrystalKami
Hey there! I'm just a guy who does writing for fun. I know my novels aren't the best, but I'm happy as long as people enjoy them.
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… who keeps track of exactly how long they’ve been reincarnated?
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Ayo double passion cook? Thats some good stuff.
Yall know that Oceania is a real place, right? Its continental Australia. This reads as though the system is saying “good job on being one of the most innovate scientist of your time! You get to go to Australia!
Yes.
That.… is a lot of money to make in one month.
Thats really weak IMO. I really only read novels if the MC is cultivating something like Advanced Demonic God Primordial Saint Nether Realm Body, but since this looks good I guess I’ll give it a try.
Oh, right, I almost forgot the thing that I found the most egregious; The Naming. could you have not spent a little bit more time with the names? At least research the language you’re using to write the names? As someone who’s learned japanese for the past few years, the names are pretty bad. “Yukionna” actually made me cringe. It seriously do not understand whats so hard about making names.
This series has been one if the best ive read on webnovel. The story is great, the characters are interesting, and the world is fascinating. This series has one MASSIVE flaw, however, and that is its writing. At first the grammar isnt too bad, some misspellings, and some odd word choice but thats about it. 100 or so chapters in, the writing gets very bad… its nigh unreadable past this point. I really do hope the author comes back and fixes a lot of the grammatical errors later down the line.
Forgot to put the skills she’s learned here.
You no kill Clown, Clown kill you!