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CrystalKami

CrystalKami

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Hey there! I'm just a guy who does writing for fun. I know my novels aren't the best, but I'm happy as long as people enjoy them.

2020-02-06 JoinedGlobal
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami1yr
    Replied to InfinitePrimus

    thanks brother. You could really say that you're "The Luckiest Gamer"

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    The Luckiest Gamer
    Games · CrystalKami
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami1yr
    Commented

    … who keeps track of exactly how long they’ve been reincarnated?

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    RE:BORN Zombie
    Fantasy · Killix_Kreed
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    He just like me fr

    He was a literal bastard since his parents had never married— and later died.
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    MMORPG: Rise of the Peerless Pumpkinmancer
    Games · ClasslessAscension
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    Ayo double passion cook? Thats some good stuff.

    Cook: 39/100**
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    Hvisland: A VR Colony Sim Game
    Games · Gaasuja
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    Yall know that Oceania is a real place, right? Its continental Australia. This reads as though the system is saying “good job on being one of the most innovate scientist of your time! You get to go to Australia!

    [Welcome to Oceania!]
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    Ocean Master
    Fantasy · GREAT
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to Neptune40

    Yes.

    (passive) gives .00000000000000005% chance to get extra loot!
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    The Luckiest Gamer
    Games · CrystalKami
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Posted

    Author here, to give myself a free five star review, but also to say thank you all for reading my novel. I promise I’ll update tbe novel soon.

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    The Luckiest Gamer
    Games · CrystalKami
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    That.… is a lot of money to make in one month.

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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games · Snoring_Panda
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    Thats really weak IMO. I really only read novels if the MC is cultivating something like Advanced Demonic God Primordial Saint Nether Realm Body, but since this looks good I guess I’ll give it a try.

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    Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy
    Games · Snoring_Panda
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to 18scattered_life

    Good luck on your endeavors, mate.

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    Alley to the last death
    Fantasy · 18scattered_life
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to PancakesWitch

    Well yes, what im stating is completely Subjective, So you arent wrong there. just my two Sense

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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to CrystalKami

    Oh, right, I almost forgot the thing that I found the most egregious; The Naming. could you have not spent a little bit more time with the names? At least research the language you’re using to write the names? As someone who’s learned japanese for the past few years, the names are pretty bad. “Yukionna” actually made me cringe. It seriously do not understand whats so hard about making names.

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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to PancakesWitch

    You are more than entitled to not listen to The criticisms I give, i do not mind.

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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to adaR

    As much as i would like to accept Your offer, I’ll have to decline. Please refrain from Contacting me further.

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    The Luckiest Gamer
    Games · CrystalKami
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Replied to AdaW

    Ok.

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    The Luckiest Gamer
    Games · CrystalKami
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Posted

    This series has been one if the best ive read on webnovel. The story is great, the characters are interesting, and the world is fascinating. This series has one MASSIVE flaw, however, and that is its writing. At first the grammar isnt too bad, some misspellings, and some odd word choice but thats about it. 100 or so chapters in, the writing gets very bad… its nigh unreadable past this point. I really do hope the author comes back and fixes a lot of the grammatical errors later down the line.

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    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    Forgot to put the skills she’s learned here.

    Skills
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    A Goblin's Evolution
    Fantasy · LucyLynn
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    You no kill Clown, Clown kill you!

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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Commented

    *they’re

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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • CrystalKami
    CrystalKami2yr
    Posted

    Obligatory Author Review here. So uhh, idk where I'm going to go with this, but I'm going to have fun doing it, and I hope you all have fun reading it!

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    Lonesome Evolution Survival
    Fantasy · CrystalKami
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